| "Mischievious Inuyasha" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: O.O
Reviewed By: InuGal666 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsomeness!!! I love it and can not wait for the rest!!! I love cliff hangers!! ..Evil... ~.^
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Reviewed By: kiKkat On: May 25, 2005 11:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a great story hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: Zatanna [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 20:41 CST
Comment/Review:
great story! please keep writing. i love the use of japanese in fanfic's it makes them seem more fun.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 02:54 CST
Comment/Review:
I've read this on ff.net and I hope you update here soon. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: NewYorker [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 17:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you've got a great plot going here. One thing that particularly bothers me is that everyone seems to think that Miroku gropes Sango every time he's near her. He doesn't grope her that often, I think he only does it when he feels a slight connection between himself and Sango. I also personally feel there isn't a need for so many random Japanese words or phrases, in the anime sieries they rarely use Japanese words. Though I admire your talent with Japanese words, I do feel it's unnecessary. I think you're a really talented and creative writer, but you (along with myself) are lacking in grammar, spelling, and details. If you added a bit more backround or discription of most things the charachters did, I'm sure not as many people will get as confused. And another pet peeve of mine; please write "A.N." before your auther's note. I am reviewing your story with respect, considering those that are reading mine fell no need to review. And (despite my feelings of discomfort and rudness) I would like to ask all that read this review; please read my story Abused Soul and review to tell me what you think of it so far! Thanks! I will keep reading and reviewing! Please update soon! **Love Much** Icki
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Reviewed By: Turthlangus On: December 06, 2004 16:41 CST
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So far this story has been great, keep up the good work. To the bozu thing, are you sure your not trying to say bouzu? That would make more sense. Like I said before, keep updating and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Inuyashin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 13:39 CST
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Hi there, your story is going to be one of my favorites. Please update soon! I'm very curios how this will go on. Besides, I like Inuyashas nice behaviour... Best regards, Luna
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 20:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great story plot and character development. i love the idea, its fresh to my eyes. great use of language and character dispositions. you really have a great thign going here. keep it up!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 02:16 CST
Comment/Review:
Thanks for fixing it and please update soon! :-)
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 00:59 CST
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The chapters in this story are messed up and in the wrong order. Chapter 3 has been loaded wrong. It is actually "Chapter 15: Terror" and doesn't make sense. Please reload or fix the chapter so that they are in the correct order. I liked the first two chapters but after that I got lost. I quit reading it because it was confusing. Please fix it so that I can read it. Thanks.
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