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Reviewed By: Yume_Hikaru [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2007 22:24 CDT
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Adorable! Very Well Written, Though The Atmosphere Seemed Closed. The Story Was Driven solely On Ichigo's Thoughts -- Keeping The Reader Confined. All The Same, This Was An Amazing Fic -- Thought Through To The End. [My One Hope Was That You Wouldn't End It .. T_T] :)
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Reviewed By: inuyashalover913 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 15:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was an amazing story very well written you are a great author:)
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2006 23:40 CDT
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this is really well writen. i hope you write more of this. so please update.
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Title: Comments from the heart and suol
Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 23:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Best Fan fic for Bleach I ever read... so far that is. Way to go. Even though your chapters ranged in varying sizes some short some longer. It all panned out for the better. I can tell you put a good deal of effort into the making of this little story. And I congradulate you. However what I had found quite confusing is the fact it ended at that moment. Although it makes perfect sense to end a story right affter a main event, the thought of leaving a story as it is is quite troubling to myself. Your story has much more potential then what tis cournetly written. If you ever do read this review then I hope you take another look and at least try to add on to it or make a continuation of this story. Although in my time of readinf Fan fiction I have made the same comment to many other writters and thosse who took my words and created another story following there finished one only id have to say a third have truly been as good or better then there originals. But the desicion is not mine to make but yours and yours alone. I just truly hope that your take the time and effort to read my review and or comments. This new fan of your writing must now go and explore the wonders of imagination with other authors out there. Best of luck on all other stories.
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Title: gah!!
Reviewed By: Purplellama On: August 27, 2005 01:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute!! really cute!! adorable, charming, melt-in-your-mouth sweet.(like ice cream. hee.) i loved it!! please please please! WRITE MORE! *gets down on her knees and begs* pleeeaase!!!! good luck with future chappies... i hope you continue! *sits down on the floor in front of you and waits for more*
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Reviewed By: WarpWizard [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 18:14 CDT
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Really good. I don't know what it is about Rukia, but I find her mysteriously attractive too. Poor Ichigo. :)
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Reviewed By: A Bleach fan On: June 02, 2005 21:54 CDT
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I really enjoyed this fic. It was so sweet. Hopefully we'll see more fics from you!!
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Title: fanfic review
Reviewed By: DEATHwisher On: May 25, 2005 21:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your fic is like noting I've ever read before! your are concentrating so much details on just one little intimate moment where the magic flows, I really like that! keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: mangaobsessive On: May 12, 2005 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a pretty good fic. Update ASAP! XD
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Reviewed By: Ai Hime On: April 25, 2005 14:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^ ^ Yay! good!Make them kiss! Make them kiss!Ichigo/Rukia for all of eternity! Make them kiss! By accident, maybe. That would be very kawaii. An accidental kiss...*sigh* Continue!
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Reviewed By: Bush hater no. 1 On: April 22, 2005 21:00 CDT
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**requests physical intimacy between Ichigo and Rukia** Hee! I'm a hentai...
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Reviewed By: Who gives? On: April 22, 2005 20:56 CDT
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Cute Cute Cute!!!!!!!!!!!!*teeth rot from cuteness* simply kawaii!! Ichiruki! Ehem but it was a little...naughty, to say the least. Lemon!!!!!!!!!!Continue or die!
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Reviewed By: RandomCritic On: April 22, 2005 02:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well done. I enjoyed this fiction very much and I expect more good work to come from you. You might want to increase the rating. I'll expect readers requesting physical intimatcy between the two very soon.
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Reviewed By: mystery woman On: March 13, 2005 12:05 CST
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ooh yay, you updated!
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Title: n/a
Reviewed By: Fallen Seraph On: March 01, 2005 18:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job on the fic. i just started to watch Bleach and i find it enjoyable. I been wondering who were writing a fluff fic about this story and it seems that you wrote one. Great job on the details and kinda wondering if it going to be lemon real soon. If not, oh well. keep writing
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Reviewed By: ShadowAngel On: February 17, 2005 20:18 CST
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I thought the way the characters acted was off. Ichigo should be more stoic and less emotional. I thought that you were leaning on the edge of cheesy. I am opposed to a lemon because, after all, Ichigo is only 15. It was at least entertaining.
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Reviewed By: Kumbia345 On: February 05, 2005 09:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fic! I liked the way you portrayed the characters. The way you desribed them was great {in my opinion}. Rukia+Ichigo fics are my favorite and I'm glad to read about them. I love Bleach the comic/anime so I was to see a fanfic on it. Currently it is my second favorite {topped only by Inuyasha} Please continue this fic!
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Title: *squee!*
Reviewed By: AquaianGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 20:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way you wrote this. I... would love to give a coherent reveiw, but my brain is dead from fangirling over this so much. You did a great job and really managed to capture the vibe these two have. Great job!
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Reviewed By: Kirie On: January 16, 2005 02:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're really good, This chapter was awesome and truly outshone its predecesor. After reading this it is obvious that a lot of thought went into this piece, I loved the way how deeply Ichigo thought of Rukia and how they skimmed from the way she made him feel at times to how he wanted her to feel about him. The only part that I didn't enjoy was whene Ichigo thoght of her as "his" Rukia, which to me is overdone sometimes. My favourtie part of this fic or should i say sentence was when you beautifully described how Rukia looked or seemed to Ichigo - when he said that she could look erotic and exotic but at this time is the most beautiful this he has ever seen - That was so impressive, I LOVED that sentence it was simply beautiful. You managed to gracefully balance innocence with sexual desire and curiosity; this leaves you with the ability to make this fic hotter at times (if you wish)yet still fall back the balance you have so masterfully attained. Your fanfic was great with amazing character depth and thoughts, and you stayed in tune with the characters personalities while they fit to your mold in your own fic - which to me is important in fanfiction and what made it all the more enjoyable. You're a great writer and I'll be waiting for the next chapter. Please make both the chapters and story longer; I'd be happy to wait for a longer fic when it is composed of writing of this caliber. Keep up the great work, Kirie
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Title: Good!
Reviewed By: Biyabo On: December 10, 2004 23:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Font Size Font Color This fic was the best!! I personally only like long fics, so my only complaint is that I wish it was longer! It stands well even without humor, but some of the usual Bleach humor would have been good, and a lemon too! ^^ Yeah, I'm a hentai. *Chibi Biyabo sticks tongue out* It got an 8 for the style of writing because the spacing effect was kind of annoying, and the perspective was a little flawed (but still good!!). I only gave a 7 for enjoyment factor because I'm sad to see a good idea like this just have to settle with being a one-shot. >< Could you continue?
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Reviewed By: Carolyn On: December 07, 2004 00:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Rukia/Ichigo fics. I think the characterization was good- we may not always know exactly what Ichigo is thinking, but this story seems to fit him well. :-) I'm glad to see the first fic in a Bleach section!
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Title: Shweet
Reviewed By: True Dark Zero [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 00:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I got all the bleach's ..well the ones they got out anyway ^.^ and have long thought about this, since otohime and ichigo arent that involved yet but yeah a rukia/ichigo would be a good mix........a hot girl popping out of my closet every morning ......that'd be kinda hard to resist for me ^.^ great story, hell make a hentai if you want! you got a fan in me (waves)
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Reviewed By: NiiM On: December 04, 2004 02:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it seriously! Ive just started into Bleach n its not my absoloute fave (thats why 8 instead of 10) but wow... i never though of the two of them together. stange. its a bit odd to see him emotional like that but u did it great! write more, presevere!
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