| "A Question of Intimacy" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 15:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still loving this, another great chapter. Poor Kagome, I look forward to learning what happened to her. A cliffhanger, please, please return soon!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 13:52 CST
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Oh come on! I want to know who comes in!
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Title: torrieoreo
Reviewed By: torrieoreo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 16:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy your interesting premise. I also understood from reading the earlier chapters that the characters are older than in the anime. Do not let other OOC comments get you down. I do not think the characters are that OOC considering that they are 5 years older and have gained some maturity. Please continue this story, it is one of my current favorites.
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Reviewed By: rocknroll7806 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 15:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I a totally agree with you. I very much enjoy your stories. I look forward everytime i notice and email update. Please do continue. Dont let anyone get you down, this is called FANFICTION for a reason. Its not real. Its not liek the real characters, because its what the fans want. Much love from your happy reader. Rocknroll7806
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Reviewed By: DragonOfDarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 21:22 CST
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Uhm, I have to say, and maybe it's because this story is set many years in the future but, Kuwabara would NEVER talk like that. im sorry if that sounds really bitchy, but i watch both Yu Yu Hakusho and Inuyasha on a regular basis, and their complete OOC attitudes are starting to scare me in this fic. PLEASE take my constructive criticism to heart. Other than that, it was an extremely intriguing read! Update soon please! ~aliya
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 19:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another terrific story! I love Kurama's description as the kitsune avatar, and Kuwabara's insightful and caring comments. Based on this story, I think I will go watch more Inuyasha, Kagome is fascinating. Poor Hiei, I hope he comes through this OK.
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 15:41 CST
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update update update! I want to know what happends next!
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Reviewed By: solqua [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 23:21 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
very interesting, please continue
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 19:12 CST
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I love it! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 15:57 CST
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interesting, I've never seen this kind of fic before.
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 15:57 CST
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interesting, I've never seen this kind of fic before.
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 21:55 CST
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Please please please make this a Heie/Kagome fic! I would love you sooo much and I would give you a BIG cookie!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 15:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What are you saying? Who is Kagome's mate? Or does she not have a mate and you're going to make Hiei her mate! Oh that would be so much fun! Please make this a Heie/Kagome story!
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Reviewed By: ZTolerance06 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is very interesting will it be a hiei/kag? or is she still mated? but overall a good start ^_^
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Reviewed By: rocknroll7806 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 15:25 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG OMG I lovvvvve it! Please update soon! gooood joooobbbbb!
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