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| "Whats Sorrow To You?" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: inu-crazed On: September 25, 2005 01:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don,t get it. How come whenever someone dies, they don't use tenseiga? I'm sure Sesshy wouldn't mind at all. It's good, real good actually, but a litle heavy on the angst. It's ok though, cause I like angst. Do me a favor and 'Put Down' Kikyo if ya know what I mean a.k.a-kill her.
| Title: whats sorrow to you
Reviewed By: inuyashagurl1992 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its good but why did you make kagome die? and wut will inuyasha do? i hate suspensions:p
| Reviewed By: InuKag Fan On: December 04, 2004 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chappie! Please update ASAP! ^-^
| Title: MVAL
Reviewed By: Author On: December 04, 2004 15:11 CST
Comment/Review:
To MVAL: Thank you so much for being so honest with me about my story. I agree with you. I did jump around a little to much. Actually i didnt plan on posting this yet. I was gonna have some friends read it and give me some advise, but its always the same "its good i like it" no criticism. I congradulate you for being so honest with me. I promese to take your advise and reread reread reread and reread. I actually planed on doin that ^_^. I promese this next one will be better, i am a starting author and i do apriciate the help. If you have any think more to say to help possibly i would love to hear what you have to say. Thankyou sincirly BitterRose
| Reviewed By: MVAL On: December 03, 2004 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhh i don't like ur style of writing to much. in the beginning, it didn't start off to well, then ith kagomes death and the wish she made was okay, but the way you wrote it appeared random to me. THe plots great,i give you your props for that,but the rest isn't so well- thats my true opinion but from you , you can probably tell me, to go shove my opinion up my ass,so whatever My suggestion to you though, before you update chapter two, reread it reread it and reread it till it sounds perfect for you But u know what, you once again must be think, "you can shove your suggestion up your ass" thats just me..
| Title: wow
Reviewed By: Richy-Chan101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 23:22 CST
Comment/Review:
wow, that was really good!!!!!!!!!!!!
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