| "The Seduction Game" Reviews/Comments [ 273 ] |
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Title: kjpan
Reviewed By: kjpanny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2009 11:59 PDT
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i realy liked ur point on he war in iraq and I agree with u on every point. Just to add something: Bush is a disgusting, greedy, and vile son of bitch. Love ya! And go on with the story. Your way of description is amazing
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Title: Chapter 11 (Again)
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2009 10:52 PDT
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Ah, there we go. Nice foreshadowing of things to come. In response to the update inquiry, I personally prefer shorter chapters more frequently. When I go for several months not reading a story, when it is updated it can be a bit hard to keep track of things anew. Also, while long chapters are nice, longer chapters tend to bore me a bit and I start to breeze through them. Compare it to drinking a can of Cola a day, every day, to drinking the entire case in a single day.
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Reviewed By: Lynzi18 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2009 10:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am in love with your story, it's funny, witty, endearing, exciting, and its filled with sexual tension. I'm at the edge of my seat at the end of every chapter. I can't wait to read more of your story. Keep up the amazing work
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Title: Chapter 11
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2009 08:48 PDT
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Heh, a nice little chapter, a bit short but nonetheless amusing. In response to your reply to my review, the other 3 disasters - 9/11, the War on Terror, and Katrina. 2000-2009 has not been a happy decade for the United States. My sympathies to them.
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Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2009 07:34 PDT
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update soon please
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Reviewed By: SailorEarth [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2009 04:01 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had to go to ff.net for the full story because both MM.org and AFF.net cut off after a certain paragraph. I don't have a sn for ff.net, so I will write you a review on here. Bravo once again! I really enjoyed this chapter, and I love the fact that you are focusing on other things than mainly around Inu/Kag stuff. I like that you are bringing up about the swords, and I like that you did not do away Sango's occupation as a tajiya. Ha ha, I thought Inuyasha was going to flip with Haku, and he nearly did with Kagome's comment. So, is Inuyasha falling for Kagome faster than her? I have an idea of what he did to her regarding her wrist. Anyways, thank you so much for updating. I know it is hard to come out of your busy grad school schedule. Focus on that first because MM.org will always be around, but your studies come first. As for long updates/long chapters or short break-ins/short updates, I say do whatever you think is best for you. If it is long updates, just don't make it too long, but again, think about yourself first.
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Reviewed By: FoxyLove [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2009 10:22 PDT
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Omgudness i have been waiting and re reading an waiting for so long for you to update this story but its soooo awesome that i would jus like to let you know that i will continue waiting adn re reading until a new chapter comes out! Also sorry to hear about that cataracts problem you have that must really suck so i wish you all the best luck with that and your extremely busy schedule. But please dont forget about this story and if you can make a new update status on FF.net to let me know that you'll be continueing it which hopefully you will be! Foxy (a.k.a biggest fan of this story) Signing Off!
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Reviewed By: SailorEarth [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 20:16 PST
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I have been waiting for a long time for you to update. The suspense is killing me. I keep checking on ff.net to see ur progress, and I am always relieved when you post that you are close to updating the story. Hopefully it wont be a long wait. i am dying to know what happens next. please update soon. Thanks. sorry to be sounding desperate :)
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Reviewed By: Lynzi18 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2008 22:36 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story!!!! Please Please update!!! I'm in love with this story.. I'm intrigued on Inu and kagome's growing relationship!! Please Please update!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 14:24 PDT
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this is great i really like it please update soon i can't wait to see what happens next. this is a awesome story.
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Reviewed By: LiZzArD [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2008 17:02 PST
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i would like to say that i have really enjoyed reading this fic, in fact this is the third time i have re-read it. i understand that you might be very busy with other things in your life but it would be greatly appreciated if you could update some time soon. i find this fic to be extreemly well written and i am in almost excruciating agony waiting to find out what happens next. please update if it is at all within your abilities.
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Reviewed By: BrokenAngel1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 14:56 PST
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omg. i'm sooo totally hooked on this story. the plot it 2 die 4. i wish i had the talent 2 come up with somethin like it. plz update soon. ur faithful reader. kudos.
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Title: SummerNightsxxx
Reviewed By: SummerNightsxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2008 13:12 PST
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Ahem...why is this shown as complete? Wheres this update your talking about?
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Reviewed By: oOSilverKyuubiOo On: November 22, 2007 21:02 PST
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I had been following this story for a really long time, and it's really really awesome. I love hos it's turning out, and am ETERNALLY GRATEFUL THAT U HAVE RETURNED! anyways, i do have a question. Does Kagome have any priestess powers in this story? Just checking ;D Please update soon! and good luck on your studies
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Reviewed By: inuyashacutie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 22:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW YOU'RE ALIVE and you've still got it
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