| "What is Love?" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: What Is Love?
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 18:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: What Is Love?
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 17:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: inumelia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i hope you update soon because inuyasha is my fav anime and galerians:Rion is my fav video game turned movie. the story is starting out good so dont let up on it ok.
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Title: Honest opinion? If you say so...
Reviewed By: Ezqiinah On: January 17, 2005 06:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh, okay. Since this is your first fanfic, I won't kill you. And I guess your grammar's okay. I guess... On to the negative parts! 1) Galerians takes place 500-something years from now. Shouldn't Kagome be long dead? 'esplain that. 2) 2000 people? You're kidding, right? Did Kagome switch brains with Parano or something? That is the most OOC thing I've ever read. 3) It's spelled 'Delmetor', not 'Delemontor'. I assume that's what you were talking about? 4) As long as it isn't a Galerians character, I don't care who she ends up with. Look, I'm sure everyone's used to this kind of crazy thing over at the Inu Yasha fandom, but please, for the love of all that is good and pure, don't bring it over here. Oh, and I never thought I'd say this, but if you put Parano in this, I'll have to eliminate you. No foolin' End of overly-long review.
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Reviewed By: Celestral-demon(not logged in) On: December 05, 2004 23:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story. but could you be more clear on some issues? like what, exactly, Kagome is? well, over all, i hope you update soon because i love this story!
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