| "Three Bakura's... One Bed..." Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 19:43 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh gawd that was hot! please continue!
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 19:57 EST
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continue soon!!! But next time, please paragraph it so it's not so hard on the eyes
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Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 10:13 EDT
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ugh, the paragraphing is screwed up by mm.org again, but other than that I loved it. I like how you've changed the lemon from the last version I saw. (aargh, mm.org won't let me review you)
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Title: *^_^*
Reviewed By: Casondra On: September 04, 2005 15:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Gezuz Khryst-- You are so awesome, I agree with the other reviewers when they say it should be a chapter fan fic, and at some point's the characters do get a little mixed up when I read them--Post pictures of the characters at the top with their name if you could... I reaaallllly enjoyed reading this and I will read your others when I get the time! ~Casondra~
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Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 11:49 EDT
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omg...I haven''t reviewed this yet...omg sorry, anyway, just like almost everybody else *glares at yakuza* I totally loved it. and yeah...continue I agree with sweetmisery1 too, GO TO HELL YAKUZA, if you don't like gay pairings, then why read them in the first place?!?!?! some ppl I just don't get
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 18:55 EST
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*reads reviews*...Yakuza can go to hell
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 18:53 EST
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Sweet! nice revision! continue soon!
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Title: um
Reviewed By: Yakuza [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 03:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
i didn't like it coz they where gay and i got bored with their motions and i almost fell asleep think more action/hentai thing no gay people
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Title: .........
Reviewed By: devildice708 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 12:12 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
......Keep going with this, I was in awe and entertained reading this.
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Title: yeah!
Reviewed By: tsutsuji [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 22:48 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you reviewed my fic because I found you and you write Thief/Bakura/Ryou !!! And you write them very hot, as well. Please do more with the three of them! Yum!
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Reviewed By: Shadow Mistress (not logged in) On: February 20, 2005 18:14 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good yummy lemony yaoi threesome, mmm, threesomes, I love threesomes. Ignore my nonsensical call outs, or maybe that are sensical just not in sentence form. lol. First B/R/T fic I've read, and I'm liking it! Write more soon, will ya? I like smuttiness. See ya. ^_~
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 16:27 EST
Comment/Review:
Please continue soon!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Yami Bakura Itemri On: January 14, 2005 08:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I reacon you should try for a multi chaptered fic. It seems you have the motivation for something like this to do with alo of diff. sexual positions. Give it a go and see how ya do then.
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Title: Hell yea
Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 20:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
of course you should continue, my only critisizm is that it becomes confusing between Bakura and the other one(this is the first time i have seen him)
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Reviewed By: TigerPup [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 09:31 EST
Comment/Review:
Ooooh this is nice! ^_^ It's the second B/R/T fic I've read, the first being on AdultFanFic.net, but this one is awesome... I love it! You should definately continue it!
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