| "Three Bakura's... One Bed..." Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: SK-fan7 On: March 25, 2012 14:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh that was tooooooo fucking gooooood damn it!!!!! *drools* |
Reviewed By: SK-fan7 On: March 25, 2012 12:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
jeeeeeeeeez this was soooooo hottttt!!!!!! You did sooooo great! Why dont you post it on ffnet? |
Reviewed By: vampirelover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2008 02:05 EDT
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niiiice with the yu yu name but i think kurama alone would be better for hem, and compared to the rest of the yugi group, it would actualy sound normal.
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Reviewed By: SaitoSuzu On: May 05, 2008 00:56 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
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Jesus cripple killing Christ, anal sex does not work that way what the frick is wrong with you
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Reviewed By: sglily [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 23:21 EST
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Bakura's cage got rattled a bit, didn't it? Who tipped off the police about the hit? Someone's gotta die. But, seeing as though Bakura had no weapon and had basically just stepped out of his vehicle - which isn't a crime either - when apphrended he'll be getting off scott free. Bakura does have a good support system in place, both of his lovers were there when he needed them most - even when he had been uncertain if one in particular would help him or not. Bakura needs some cheering up... (wiggles eyebrows up and down...) Yeah... LOTS of manly type cheering up... ; )
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Reviewed By: Saiyamaru-nli On: October 05, 2006 18:21 EDT
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If you're going to go about this realistically, no, Kura isn't going to jail. What will they charge him with? They have nothing on him. Sorry, my father was a copper, so these little details get to me. They should have waited until Kura was IN the house, and acting in a way that could be interpreted as hostile/threatening to the man inside. Hell, at the very least, they could have waited 'till he was at the door to see if he was going to try and force/break his way in, but as it is.... I mean, sure the cops probably have proof of the hit being on the guy, and that the hit was given to Kura, but with how things are, and with no past convictions, the case won't hold in court. Hell, Kura could sue their asses, and he might actually win... Though it probably wouldn't be worth the cost to try, considering the coppers have a very long line of attorneys on their side for occasions well, not that similar to this one, because I Really doubt the Man in charge keep around the type of rookie that would fuck up that incredibly bad, that deeply. *lol* Sorry, you hit on one of my rant subjects, I'll stop now. Anyway, I liked this chapter, sure it's a bit short, and there was no hot Baku Smex, but it was well written, and I enjoyed the sweetness between the three Baku, as well as what is developing between the two Seme's(would Kura be considered a seme in that case?). And I loved Kura's alias, very nice... Have you ever noticed that Kurama kind of looks like a red- haired Baku? He does! And the similarities (physically) between him and Ryou are creepy.
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Reviewed By: wild4rose7cool On: September 26, 2006 08:37 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! *drools uncontrollably* that is soooooo hot! next chapter soon please!!!!! i just can't get enough of this story *goes back and re-reads it 50 more times*! great work!!
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Reviewed By: sglily - nli On: September 20, 2006 10:41 EDT
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I have to agree with my friend, Saiyamaru... the background information is not a bad thing at all. In fact, it makes the story more appealing and a much better read. Hey! Not that pure smut isn't good either! However, there is something to say for having a bit of both. It also makes the characters more believable. Enjoyable chapter!
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Reviewed By: Saiyamaru-nli On: September 18, 2006 13:35 EDT
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Background information has yet to be a bad thing, so anyone who dosn't like the lack of pure smut, can deal. Yay for the update, I'm looking forward to the next one.
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Reviewed By: Nyami Rose On: September 05, 2006 20:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
10 for origanality. That was pretty damn creative. I think you need to re-upload this chapter again becuase all of your precious tabs, and new paragraohs and spaces...died. You need to put in spaces in-between each paragrafes and tabs. Still, great story. Very, VERY, creative! Excuse me for a sec... Okay I'm fine now. Oh, shit, looks like I have to chng my panties... CONTINUE!!! Please? -Nyami
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Reviewed By: Tjay On: November 23, 2005 01:22 EST
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Sorry about the paragraphing... MM.org is a bitch... email me and i will send you a cleaned up copy.
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Reviewed By: Kome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 19:43 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh gawd that was hot! please continue!
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 19:57 EST
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continue soon!!! But next time, please paragraph it so it's not so hard on the eyes
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Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 10:13 EDT
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ugh, the paragraphing is screwed up by mm.org again, but other than that I loved it. I like how you've changed the lemon from the last version I saw. (aargh, mm.org won't let me review you)
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Title: *^_^*
Reviewed By: Casondra On: September 04, 2005 15:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Gezuz Khryst-- You are so awesome, I agree with the other reviewers when they say it should be a chapter fan fic, and at some point's the characters do get a little mixed up when I read them--Post pictures of the characters at the top with their name if you could... I reaaallllly enjoyed reading this and I will read your others when I get the time! ~Casondra~
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