| "You Already Have a Valentine" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Reviewed By: Almighty Neko-chan On: May 14, 2005 01:11 CDT
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I LOVE YOU! *GLOMP* THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!! NO MORE BLINDYNESS! ... ^_^' Ahem. Anyway. Gaaaah! Now I'm anxious to read the next chappie. You have to update soon! HAVE TO! ...Please? ~Almighty Neko-chan~
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Reviewed By: paniwi. On: May 11, 2005 03:15 CDT
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a bit of a boring chapter, are yugi and yami getting together, something tells me so, I can't wait for the action you promised!!! plz update soon. and plz stop using light bright colors on white, it really is hard to read!
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Reviewed By: Shinigami248 On: May 11, 2005 01:40 CDT
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Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: May 11, 2005 01:40 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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*screams* MY EYES! I'M BLINDED! Bright Yellow on White's not what I meant! I want Black on White! Otherwise, okay chapter.
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Reviewed By: Almighty Neko-chan On: May 10, 2005 23:39 CDT
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*ish blinded yet again* PLEASE, change the font! Black on white, blue on white, I don't care! Just something that won't blind me...>.< This is the third time I've said this? Meh. On a kinder note...I love your story. ^_^' ~Almighty Neko-chan~
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Title: CONFUSED??x_x
Reviewed By: shaddowstalker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
x_x i went to read chapter 8 and it was'nt there the words don't pop up v_v i hope u can fix it i wanna see what's happening?????????
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Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: April 03, 2005 22:00 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For the love of RA go back to black on white! I got the shock of my life when I loaded this page only to fine nothing! When I highlightened, i realized you used white on white. So I'm asking you to go back to the normal black on white, since the rest of us won't get blinded, and won't have to highlight the chapter to be able to read this...
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 22:40 CST
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It's white on white? Geeze, I had to highlight everything in order to read it, but other than that it's good. I like it still and Bakura seems OOC but it's to be expected. I can't wait for your update.
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Reviewed By: Almighty Neko-chan On: April 02, 2005 17:40 CST
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When I said stop updating in yellow, that didn't mean change it to WHITE. Grrr... *sigh* Oh well...
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Reviewed By: paniwi (NLI) On: April 02, 2005 14:00 CST
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yeey you updated *pulls out gun* write or die *pulls trigger* *flag saying "bang" comes out* ok, so much for my deaththreat about updating *sticks out hand* next time you updat, do it in black, not yellow, not WHITE, but black, or face an eternity in the shadowrealm.....ok, I'm getting sidetracked here, I like it update,.......god I'm such a hentai, I keep waiting for the lemon DON'T RUSH IT THOUGH, IT WOULD SPOIL EVERYTHING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Almighty Neko-chan On: March 31, 2005 16:58 CST
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ARGH! NO MORE YELLOW! IT ISH BLINDING MY POOR EYES! RAAAAAWR! ...^_^' Okay, with that aside...Me likey! I want to read more Bakura/Ryou goodness! *huggles Baku plushie* UPDATE SOON! ~Mooselini McSqueegee, The Almighty Neko-chan~
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Title: VERY CONFUSED
Reviewed By: shaddowstalker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 13:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plez say that was'nt the last chapter. and was ryou dreaming? did him and bakura do all that stuff at the party?, and after did they kiss all night? why is bakura gone??? is the story over??
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Title: kewl!!
Reviewed By: shaddowstalker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 12:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv the story it's awsome but i have to say that the bright letters u use would be nice if they were'nt there they gave me a headache they were so bright it was hard to read the story but plez continue the story it is awsome
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Reviewed By: marcopolo On: March 24, 2005 18:20 CST
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nice story but the yellow writing was a little annoying. I would up highlighting it all just so it was easier to read
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 21:44 CST
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A little hard to read...seriously, yellow writing isn't fun to try to read...especially against a white background. If you don't do that again, I'm good...I have a headache now...but I still liked the chapter. Nothing against yellow writing, just makes me dizzy reading it against white backdrop. Good chapter though!
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