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| "Christmas on Monster Island" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 › » ] | Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 15:45 EST
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hey DJ! heh,well,after receiving the silver,heart shaped pendant,i knew i liked it as soon as i saw what it was,after all it was from DMG,for DMG,lets say i can make hell of a load of weapons,so,i gave her a more advanced magic staff,which still looked like nothing changed,tho,she can cast more spells now than before,and with the amulet i recieved,i treasured it with my heart. and u can bet im joing the new years fic for sure! shane.
| Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 19:26 EST
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When Jesus came to your home, I felt a little nervous and shaky at the same time. I felt like that I'm going to faint. I feel blessed that I spent time with you and everyone else on Christmas Eve. Hope you have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year. Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 15:29 EST
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im speechless.......that is what i call a surprise,as to seeing him face-face.......i was dumbfounded and i couldnt even move,and to see my loved one back that i missed......lets just say i couldnt handle all of it.....hehe,i know,i blacked out when he came by and i saw my lost one........tho i dont know if DMG noticed that i passed out or not...anyways,hope i regain conciousness soon ^^;; shane.
| Title: awesome!!
Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 23:14 EST
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sweet chapter dude! and i think ur psuchic,i was hoping a fight would happen and that i got to fight mecha godzilla,that was awesome! to ur question: i was fighting and DMG/mana (same person) was watching seing who would win. if ur surprise is something like from the halloween one,im gonna blast the creature into nothingness,but im guessing that the surprise is a different person,maybe,the fat ol' jolly man in the red suit....to see him WOULD shock everyone to the core. but,its just a guess,i just hope i wont have to fight it. update whenever possible,this rocks! shane.
| Reviewed By: paralleltodarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 20:53 EST
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I just noticed... you've been spelling my name wrong. "Meira," not "Meria." Will you please correct it in future chapters? Thank you! Erm... I was at the fight. Just watching, I'm not much of a fighter. But really... is this 'surprise' going to be like the Halloween one? -_- I guess we're just going to have to wait and see, huh?
| Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 20:51 EST
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I was cuddling with Yami as usual! He's so warm!! Update soon.
| Title: Shuein Party
Reviewed By: Erick-Genryusai [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 19:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The Party is getting great. Me-(Erick-Deimos)- and my girlfriend Delia would like to appeared on it. One scene will be durint the kiss under the misletote...where Johnny Bravo tries to kiss a girl, and instead of a kiss, he recives a punch. And...have the Bundy Familiy-(my most loved comedy series)- also atended the party. I can see Bud Bundy trying to score whit the chicks whit his famosos -"Grand Master D"- rutine, and getitng nothing outta it, and Al Bundy boring the guest whit his famosos -"Score 4 Touch-Downs in High School"- lame prahse and try to recluit some anime characters for his -"NO-MAM"- loser club . Erick will do some special magic whit the assisten of Mana-Dark Magician Girl to some guest, and they'll be impress. Have some pairings too, cause, anything is possible here in Cristhmas right. Can wait to see the Party when everyone dance...have MC.Hammer, Ac Dc, Marly Monroe, Kiss and other great rappers make a perfomence. Erick will bring forth Beavis and Butt-Head to the party, and those 2 will cause major lame and girl-hunting. Lets see what happen nexts.
| Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 14:10 EST
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Me and Yami were at the movies cuddled up with each other. Me wants to make out with him so badly. Please update soon. Ja ne.
| Reviewed By: Lady D 10290 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 23:44 EST
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Me: Hey DJ great chapter. Just so you know. I was on the winning team in the snowball fight. Heh, heh Morrigan was great. Brittany: I was watching movies. You wouldn't catch me 1 inch outside. Me: What if there was free hot cocca? Britt: Okay maybe the situation would be different. Laura: I was at the race. Snowboarding's fun. ^_^ Me: I'm pretty excited about the surprise. Britt: Actually I kind of stayed from surprises after Halloween. Me: Oh brother. Anyway update soon and Merry Christmas!
| Reviewed By: paralleltodarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 17:19 EST
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*raises eyebrow* This surprise isn't going to be anything like the 'surprise' on Halloween, is it? I was at the snowball fight, and I was one of the *drumroll* victors. Lol... update soon!
| Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 15:49 EST
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hey,im sorry for not reviewing yesterday,i was busy,and,i was in a carriage with DMG,very good fic so far,i cant wait to see wats happening on the 24 th... hmm,keep up the good work. shane.
| Reviewed By: paralleltodarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 12:52 EST
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Me? I'm up there, joining in the snowball fight! ^-^ Since when do I not love throwing and dodging snowballs? Great fic - update soon!
| Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 12:44 EST
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Excellent fic. Where am I you said? I'm dancing with Yami is because I love dancing to R&B and Rap music. The party is really fun!! This is better than the Halloween one. Well, I hope the party will turn out to a really cool one. Well, hope you update soon. Ja ne.
| Reviewed By: Lady D 10290 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 21:18 EST
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Me: Well the party is off to a good start. I can't wait to see what happens next. Laura: This is gonna be great! Anyway update soon.
| Reviewed By: Yamifanner (author) On: December 18, 2004 18:39 EST
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My family: *staring in awe* Me:Excellent fic. What I brought to decorate the christmas tree was some ornaments (not ordinary ornamets, the ornaments are silver,gold,pink,red,purple,green and blue with glowing aroras that matches the ornament colors). Also,I brought some silver bells that are really shiny and the shine lasts long and christmas lights that shine really bright. Love the story and I cannot wait until the party starts. Update!!!
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