| "Angels and Demons" Reviews/Comments [ 91 ] |
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Title: IM LOVIN IT!!!!
Reviewed By: Kari202 On: March 25, 2005 14:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!! this has got to be the best crossover fic i have ever read!!!!! anyway...keep up the good work....THE KILLERS ROCK!!! ....oh and if you want to see some D.N angel episodes you can go to animecrave.com ^^ ~*Kari*~
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Reviewed By: mikos-heart On: March 19, 2005 03:43 CST
Comment/Review:
i'm guessing the man is naraku
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Reviewed By: PrincessRock323 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 18:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon, this is really good and I hope I get to know who this mysterious stranger is.
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Reviewed By: kai28 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 09:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this si the most interesting story i've ever read you should continue it soon!
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Reviewed By: BlackShadowNeko On: March 14, 2005 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon , your story was really orignal , I have not really seen a story like tis I mean sure there are some like it , but hardly an D.N / inu yasha crossovers
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Reviewed By: Kelly Hartnett On: March 13, 2005 18:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, this is awesome. Who is that mysterious stranger? I wonder.... anywayz ^_^ please update soon.
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Reviewed By: a-mikos-heart On: March 13, 2005 14:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fanfic rocks but please more action romance and danger a kidnap would nice more detail
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Title: COOL!!!!!
Reviewed By: Kelly Hartnett On: March 11, 2005 20:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is awesome, please update. I really enjoy this story. I suggest a Dark/Kagome/Daiske pairing.
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Reviewed By: angellite23 On: March 08, 2005 13:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i really enjoyed reading this story and await new chapters.
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Reviewed By: Caladriel On: March 06, 2005 21:04 CST
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Yay-ness! Another chapter! I sit in awe and amazement at your writing prowress. ^_^ I can't wait for the next chapter! Hmm.... this mystery person working with Saotoshi/Krad...who could he be...? ^^
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Reviewed By: DomoArigotoMr.Roboto On: March 06, 2005 13:03 CST
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Real cute. I cant wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: blacktenko On: March 06, 2005 12:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! cool story! first one of DNAngel/Inu Ive seen and it IS TERRIFIC!!The pairing....i approve but wont Rika/Risu want to intervene?....UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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Title: Angels and Demons
Reviewed By: Kagome's Dark Soul On: March 05, 2005 11:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfect Ten!! Such a Great story!!! Cant wait for updates!!!!!!! Please update!!
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Title: LOVE IT!
Reviewed By: I don't wanna login On: March 04, 2005 19:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story so far! Update soon! :>^-^
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Reviewed By: DemonAngel90 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok the reason for my ratings is because I think you have a great potential to be a writer. But you need some work. Put spaces between quotes. Like, "Kagome said 'blah.'" put two lines of space between there and, "Daisuke said, 'BLAH BLAH!'" And also, do you think you can put more detail into the paragraphs? Like you just said bluntly, "Inuyasha died in combat." and that was it about Inuyasha. Explain how he died and how hard he fought. Put more detail into how Naraku died too. Also and try to put more of a setting in the first chapter, like, "Kagome walked down a windy street, under the cloud scattered sky which hid the moon from view." or something like that. I like how this is going though. Try to tweek it up a bit ya know? Please?
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