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Title: y.a.17
Reviewed By: yamialex17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 13:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHY"D YOU STOP I WAS ENJOYING IT MORE PLZ AND SOON WOULD BE GREAT!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ~A~ On: December 10, 2004 12:17 CST
Comment/Review:
I definitely think you should continue. It's an interesting concept and I don't think I;ve ever seen anyone write this kind of fic before. I agree with the other reviewer that a little background would be nice, and I think it would be fun if Kagome got a chance to "torture" him back ^_~ Please continue and update soon!
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Reviewed By: inu_chick On: December 09, 2004 20:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hope u write the other chapter same as u i ahvent had sex in weeks
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Reviewed By: Silver Moon Dragon (not signed on) On: December 09, 2004 19:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
§¤ PLEASE FINISH IT!!!! PLEEEEEEEAAASSSSE!!?? lol yeah if you couldnt tell, i liked your first chapter lol ^-^ ¤§ §¤§ Silver Moon Dragon §¤§
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Title: torure
Reviewed By: inu-2004 On: December 08, 2004 18:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like the idea of inuyasha torturing kagome. It's a good story so far and i really really hope you continue soon. Please you are a good writer and I enjoyed it very much.
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Reviewed By: Yvonne On: December 08, 2004 13:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Definitely nedd more :)
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Reviewed By: LaDDee_WaRRioR [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 00:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well written, I enjoyed reading it. The whole plot of sexual torture was really cool. Please continue with it. See ya!
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Reviewed By: LaDDee_WaRRioR [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 00:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well written, I enjoyed reading it. The whole plot of sexual torture was really cool. Please continue with it. See ya!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 23:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
you have a great plot here. i think a littel attention needs to be drawn to why he's asking her questions and what the fued between him and the others is, just to get some background. but you have a great story here. props to you and i'm really looking forward to see where you take it.
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Title: tessie
Reviewed By: tessie_fanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 23:03 CST
Comment/Review:
dang, nice job, update soon! i want to read the second part! tessie
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 18:07 CST
Comment/Review:
continue! i've been dying for more inu-kag lemons...and i just love 'em when inu bends kagome to his will. the sexual attraction between them should leave both of them helpless. as for torture...i was half afraid that you would have him actually being physically violent with her...and even for an AU, i personally can't stand the thought! i just can't wrap my brain around inu ever intentionally physically harming kagome! but i'm glad you've gone the smut route! i want more! i'm sure as heck that kagome wants more!
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Reviewed By: Silver Slayer777 On: December 07, 2004 14:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is extreamley original and fun to read. I personaly enjoyed it. I almost never review,that should tell you somthing.
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Reviewed By: Laura (too lazy to login) On: December 07, 2004 09:19 CST
Comment/Review:
really interesting story, that's the first Inu/Kag I ever read with a plot like this (and trust me, I've read many stories ^^) Please, keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Lady of Fate [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 08:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was good please write another chapter soon.
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