| "Sins Of The Pharaoh" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 13:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That pharaoh deserves death...*gulps* Sickening... C'mon, update this soon!
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Title: ... holy sh*t...
Reviewed By: Shadow (too lazy to log in) On: February 19, 2005 10:58 CST
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i think... i'm gonna be sick *covers mouth and swallows hard* man, i have got to see hte ending. man talk about cruel and not fit to live... *shudders and attacks voodoo doll* stay dead you bastard from hell!!!
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 21:03 CST
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Bastard deserves to die! Okay...good chapter though! I can't wait to read what happens... Damn Anubis...he'll get what's coming to him...right? UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 16:59 CST
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Poor Aria... to see her father in that condition, and treated so cruely! But to have such confidence at the age of three that the Pharoh won't hurt her? I wonder why that is... Seth is so indulgent to Aria it's cute! Is he like that with all his children, indulgent? Update soon please, I can't wait to see what you have planned next!
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: Draza [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 13:48 CST
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i'm so glade you updated, for a minute i thought you'd forgotten about this story!!! *bows* please forgive this ones..uh...stupidity (for lack of better word) anyhoo! i'm really glade you were able to update and i hope you'll update again soon!!! i love this story so much, i seem to like your stories with chibi Aria and Aten the most....hell i can't count how many time i've read Baby of mine. you know what though...i can't remember the last time you had some good old-fashion Anzu bashing in your stories....just thought i'd mention it...
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Reviewed By: anubiset (too lazy to log in) On: February 15, 2005 13:12 CST
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The moment with Seth and Aria was sweet. I hate Yami, more and more. In this one and the other one. He deserves whatever he gets in the end. NO matter how bad.
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Title: damn
Reviewed By: ShadowofLight from aff On: February 15, 2005 11:42 CST
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i totally agree with seth. the pharaoh must be stop... i jsut hope it's soon. sorry but htat's all i can come up with today. laterz
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 17:57 CST
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This is really good...I really like it! Aria is adorable!
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Reviewed By: Beysie (it won't let me log in!) On: January 22, 2005 17:56 CST
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This chapter is so sad... Aria will grow up in good hands at least, with Seth... But I feel so bad for him! His wife taken from him in such a brutal manner. *wails* It's not fair for him! It's a good thing that the Pharoh doesn't know that the baby's sex is pretty much all determined by the man's sperm... something to do with the x and y chromosomes. I don't know the details. Please update soon!
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Title: Draza
Reviewed By: Draza [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 17:29 CST
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very good chappie. Aria's constant 'why's' reminded me of long days during the summer...*goes into dreamy state* i would bug my mother all day with questions of 'why'. then she would pick me up...carry me to my room...and throw me on the bed and say 'that's why!'lol. And i see the Helpless Child made an appearence...well...sorta...poor poor little chibi/pre-monster.
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Title: whee!!
Reviewed By: Shadow (too lazy to log in) On: January 22, 2005 16:59 CST
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aria is adorable!! poor aten... yami is more than a bastard... and i feel so sorry for seth. u would think that yami would get hte clue that the gods don't want his heir on the throne. dick is probably so pathetic he couldn't impregnate the most fertile of women if his black soul depended on it. heh yeah he's hte king alright, king of the most pathetic dick in existance!!! *laughs insanely then calms* oh that was good but i bette go finish cleaning my room. laterz!!
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 12:42 CST
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Wow...bloody battles and such! That's cruel...Yami is really cruel...I want to see how this ends up... UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: Beysie (*gasps* it's letting me review!) On: January 16, 2005 10:07 CST
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Well, that was rather deep! I liked it though. I just hope nothing happens to Aten's new friend... I have a sense of dread when it comes to Ravana. You have a penchant for some char deaths when it gives angst to the major chars! and Aria and Aten having a chance meeting, it was sweet how she helped him! However, even if I remember the moment when Marik finally met his son, in here it seemed odd how he just showed up out of nowhere... but then again it could just be that I'm used to the adults having the main point of view, not the kids like it is here... although your one comment where Anubis is fighting Aten, you mentioned Marik quite out of the blue, and it looked like a name error until you read further. Had to read that part three times to completely figure out what you meant in there. But hey, it was still a great chapter... update soon, ok?
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Reviewed By: Shadow (too lazy to log in) On: January 15, 2005 19:49 CST
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wow i like it! shows much much yami was a fucking asshole and how bakura and marik really loved their family and children. wow... i can't wait for the next chapter! and yeah ravana made an appeareance! yay!!
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 19:33 CST
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Wow, some storyline you have going! I can't wait to read more, update this soon!
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