| "Mission Log: Hatred's Obsession" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: DarkAlchemist269 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 17:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Geezz Athrun can tease pretty well. love the wa Yazc yelled at the end
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Reviewed By: Stellar Loussier (fanfiction.net) On: August 24, 2005 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ish so... i love that pairing... Yzak and Athrun -drools- i shold write a fanfic with them... but in the mean time... please update i can't go on with out another chapter... AND SUCH A CLIFFHANGER! >.< anywho update... please...
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Title: islanderpryde
Reviewed By: islanderpryde [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
end it with yzak/athrun!!! its way more better and surprising!!!!!!! dis fic is tight and nothinng i've ever read before...so please for the sake of my crying heart finish dis story!!! hahahahaha....
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Reviewed By: hyper-bitch On: June 11, 2005 13:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
plz plz update i really love this fic (and i hope it will end up as kira/athrun no offence to the yzak fans but i just dont find him as appealing as the other two) so update ok! or ill hunt you down and uu dont wanna know what ill do! -cherio ^-^
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Title: Not enthralling
Reviewed By: Sweetdeily [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 05:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
I found this very hard to get into, you have some real potential, but you're severly lacking in description and you jump around like a plot-bunny. If you keep your stories more focused, and add a bit more detail in, I'm sure they'd be incredible.
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Title: [........]
Reviewed By: crystal_clear_13 On: April 15, 2005 17:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are truly an artist.Please continue...
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Title: awsome
Reviewed By: Kitsune Ice [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2004 18:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is awsome Ego_sama i know you girls worked on this very hard. i love it kira is so hot and yes i know that he is claimed by Ego dont worry . keep this up this took me 2 hours to read concidering i had to get off so many times. well i love it update when you can.
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Title: Hurry Please!
Reviewed By: aoshi4misao [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 22:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've never read or even wanted to read this pairing before but then I read this one and now I have to wait for you to update, so please please please update soon! I can't wait until the next chapter is up, this is an interesting and very compelling couple. Great job so far, keep up the good work and please update soon.
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