| "Tiger Lilies" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: KogasHentaiLuver On: January 17, 2005 00:19 CST
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Another awesome chapter. The way you are able to wield a story just amazes me. Your creative style is truly a gift. I look forward to the next chapter.
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Title: Great chapter
Reviewed By: TKM [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 15:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story get with each chapter more and more interesant. I start to wait for your story every day. You are doing reat work here. Keep writing and posting and we all will wait. Good work
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Title: Great chapter
Reviewed By: TKM [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 15:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story get with each chapter more and more interesant. I start to wait for your story every day. You are doing reat work here. Keep writing and posting and we all will wait. Good work
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Reviewed By: Patty 40 On: January 12, 2005 21:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe I have over 30 stories in my mail box @-@.And now I have to review them all..Wow, well you see I haven't been home to read stories.So I am way behind.So now what to do ?There are to many stories to review so I'm doing a mass review .Yah again I know I've done this a few times before and I'm sure you all don't like it but I rather take the time to read the stories ,than take the extra time to write all those reviews .Because you see I have to leave again and I don't know when I'll be on line again..So ok to all of you wonderful writers I have read your stories and your updated stories because some of you have updated 2 or 3 times since I last reviewed you. And I really have enjoyed or are enjoying your stories..Wow that was a mouth full .I'm taking a breath now..~_~I really wanted to let every one know I'm reading every chapter and If this review shows up on multiple chapters or different stories by the same author I'm sorry but I'm doing the best I can ..I'm running from hospital to home and it is whereon me out..So all of you please keep up the good work and so long as you keep writing, I'll keep reading...Patty ..Sorry this is not a very good review..(*_~)
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Reviewed By: Patty 40 On: January 12, 2005 21:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe I have over 30 stories in my mail box @-@.And now I have to review them all..Wow, well you see I haven't been home to read stories.So I am way behind.So now what to do ?There are to many stories to review so I'm doing a mass review .Yah again I know I've done this a few times before and I'm sure you all don't like it but I rather take the time to read the stories ,than take the extra time to write all those reviews .Because you see I have to leave again and I don't know when I'll be on line again..So ok to all of you wonderful writers I have read your stories and your updated stories because some of you have updated 2 or 3 times since I last reviewed you. And I really have enjoyed or are enjoying your stories..Wow that was a mouth full .I'm taking a breath now..~_~I really wanted to let every one know I'm reading every chapter and If this review shows up on multiple chapters or different stories by the same author I'm sorry but I'm doing the best I can ..I'm running from hospital to home and it is whereon me out..So all of you please keep up the good work and so long as you keep writing, I'll keep reading...Patty ..Sorry this is not a very good review..(*_~)
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 03:52 CST
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Sorry i thought the separators i put in for the quotes would have shown up, sorry about that
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 03:51 CST
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DArn! I lost my original comment on your most recent chapter so hopeful this summary will do... It's really disturbing that Heero discovered the labtop in such a state and the moment i envisioned all sorts of crazy ideas that swam through this noggin of mine. One was that prehaps whatever it was that Duo was looking at on his computer caused him to drop his now rotted sandwich... prehaps he was targeted and a program that screws with your mind a subliminal message was pressed into Duo's head?? the most extreme thought i had was that aliens came and abducted this cutey mid-bite of his sandwich *snickers* But just the image alone of the discarded laptop left on, food of all things! Duo doesn't waste food! Has me not quite edgy but wary.. is this leaning towards horror?!? Your computer as well?" Heero wondered, seeing a perfect opening. Duo frowned as he sat on top of the washer, legs dangling. "Computer? Nothing's wrong with my computer." Puzzled, Heero replied, "I noticed that it hadn't been used for some time... that's why I assumed... " Duo suddenly hopped off the washer, braid swinging. "I have to go work on Tiger Lily, if you don't mind. " ok here, I say that Duo was listen to an extend and then the moment the comp room is brought up it's was like something clicked, sn automatic response to stop Duo from thinking about the room?! Like earlier when Duo tried to tell Heero what he had wanted to do after the war. need to sleepppp more please
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Title: Hope this works
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 07:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope MM.org is over it's little brain infarction so I can finally tell you how much I'm enjoying this fic. Very intriguing. I'm wondering just how messed up Duo really is. He seems quite odd and out of it. I do love caring Heeros, too. *g* Look forward to more!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 02:56 CST
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Wa! Wuffers called Duo by his first name. ""May I say, sirs," the doctor interjected, "That neither of you seem to know the patient very well. I suggest that you allow the hospital to care for him while you return to your... activities." "You might, but we're not taking your suggestion," Heero growled back. "Show us where Duo is."" Damn right! I was practically jumping with joy that they didn't, that heero didn't abandon duo to the hospital staff who would have taken him to the psych ward *shivers* i don't think they would have let him go if he told them that he was fine *hates hospitals too, they're too cold and make me feel uneasy* I like this! Duo has an obsession and now financial backing to realize it. THat in itself truly sucks, and it can take over one's waking thoughts. I had a story that did that to me, in my dreams, my waking thoughts, on my mind so much that i would wake up and start writing *grins* i'm not that good of a writer but i wrote it all down like a girl possessed. *i think i was* Well the main point is this is INTERESTING so PLEase do continue! *shakes her head* I talk too much sometimes ya know...
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Reviewed By: Dyna D On: December 13, 2004 10:29 CST
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*blinks* I'm trying to catch up with all my favorite fics and I find you have a new one. How do you keep them all straight? Anyway, I like the tone of this one. Heero enamored with Duo? Gotta love that. Then Duo's obsessed with a mysterious project - sounds like a winner to me. Looking forward to more of this and all your other wonderful, on-going stories.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: December 12, 2004 19:01 CST
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So far so good. This fic has my attention, please update soon and keep up the good job!
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: December 12, 2004 13:02 CST
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Wooo! Although I know my name had nothing to do with this, I still am amused that the correct spelling of my name is in this. Anyway, nifty ass fic. Unstable sounding Duo!! Who could ask for more? Please update this and your other fics soon. Thank you ^_^
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: Sara chan On: December 12, 2004 10:06 CST
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my! so far I think that I love it even more then your other works. It's simply great!
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Title: New story - Great
Reviewed By: TKM [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 09:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The new story starts great. I dont like when Duo has the trubel all the time but I hope you will make him soon okay and with good and strong spirits. I will wait for more every day. Great work
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Title: Wheeee!
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 15:14 CST
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Ah, another great start. Look forward to more.
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