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 Title: duels
Reviewed By: Shadow of Light (too lazy to log in)  On: February 01, 2005 15:08 CST
Comment/Review:
yeah those two kick ass!! wish it was in the shadow realm but way to go robbie and umi!! man i won't want to go aginst those two they'll kick my ass! *giggles* it was sweet. and sgt barnes, how dare he!! he's gonna twist poor hayden's words around!! and aria... lord above and lady below not again... i can only think of one late thing to say: for the sake of the loves one in this story, i hope justice is severed for them all. and tell u what, if i get copies i'll give u one.
 Reviewed By: Beysie (too lazy to log in)  On: February 01, 2005 13:32 CST
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What the hell is with this spam thing now? *mutters angrily* Oh well. Hey, you left a rather nasty cliffie girl! Aria's prego again... but who's is it? Not only that, but is she going to be able to carry it to term, with that curse that Yami put on her? That's if she even want's the child, of course. I'm so proud of Umi and Robbie, how they beat those boys in the duels! Beat them down like the two bit rates they are! But poor Marik... with the picture you painted of his work place and uniform, I don't blame Robbie for laughing. I thought it was great control that he didn't laugh out loud! Gods knows I did when I read it! Update soon please!
 Reviewed By: Draza [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 01, 2005 12:04 CST
Comment/Review:
*rolls eyes* here we go again!!! That was an awsome duel between Robbie and Eric *shakes fists* and Umi and Jason *shakes fists* thank you for the Asher plushie!! *huggles plushie* but i think i might need another one though, the first one was for Barnes, this one is going to be shared between Eric and Jason...*plays retro-evil-spooky-manical-laughter* ^.^ You'd think the ppl at the hospital (or what ever it's called) would realize that Hayden's in no shape to be questioned by police!!! *smacks doctors and nurses* but i was wondering when he was going to come back in. And what happened to Jaimen? i don't remember the last time you wrote him in (course i have short term memory loss, so for give me if it was only a few chapters ago).
 Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl (not logged in)  On: January 30, 2005 23:30 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh Ra no, you are so evil, or rather Yami is! So much is going on, the drama, oh the drama @_@. lol. I can't believe Seto's arrested. I just want to kill that Barnes, or better yet burn him like Asher said. Sexual assault, gay dangerous?!?! Bullshit! Damn Barnes and Yami for causing this!!! *wants to kill someone now* Ok, enough yelling. lol. Ryou, he better be ok, poor guy. He needs to take better care of himself. An excellent chapter but quite evil. *runs of ranting*
 Reviewed By: I Is Me  On: January 30, 2005 09:36 CST
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"On the screen, the reporters were hovering around Seto, placing microphones in his face and licking cameras at him." Bwahahahaha!!! *sniff* sorry, I know typos happen and I shouldn't poke fun, but that just gave me a mental picture of a camera with a toungue!!! *****************sigh*... I should be used to it by now. Your characters have more problem and heartbreak than any 9others. *resignedly pulls sharpened Millenium Backscratcher out of it's scabbard*
 Reviewed By: Beysie (too lazy to log in)  On: January 29, 2005 20:04 CST
Comment/Review:
You had better have Ryou just unconcious from exhaustion and not a heart attack! And Seto had better be able to prove that he is innocent! Of course we know he is, it's that damn Yami of course! Argh... I feel so much like Asher right now! Update soon please!
 Reviewed By: Broken Time (NLI)  On: January 29, 2005 19:25 CST
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Innocent! Bwahaha, I see riiight through that look! No sir-y, I know you are up ta something! Ryou... Did you just kill off one of our dearly beloved Bishonen???
 Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 29, 2005 15:45 CST
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What the @#**%$#%$#^?!?!?! Not another cliffie! *desperately tries to see outcome* I can't believe Seto got arrested for something he never did. Don't they need more evidence? Well, if Sgt.Barnes is the one arresting him, I can be sure it won't be fair or true! "Sexual assult" my ass (that sounded weird, didn't it?)! I hope this doesn't drastically affect Robbie's proposal to Aten. _o_ They deserve to be together, just like Seto and Joey. Ryou had better live, or I'm going to... *can't find her plastic school-lunch spork* well, I'm going to do something and it'll be really really bad!
 Reviewed By: Tari Helyanwe (not logged in)  On: January 29, 2005 15:42 CST
Comment/Review:
Good grief! Please tell me that Seto will be cleared of these charges?! *glares* Kuso...I forced myself to read this chapter because I'm beyond upset at what Yami has done! And that Barnes guy...he can go to hell. Everything that can go wrong, has gone wrong in this chappie alone. And poor Ryou...always putting others ahead of himself...I really do hope things turn out alright.
 Reviewed By: Draza [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 29, 2005 14:48 CST
Comment/Review:
*glares and moves towards Bakurasgirl* are you TRYING to kill off everyone or drive me insane? And can i borrow Asher please? I need to visite Sgt Barnes. Please? I'll pay rent! And poor Ryou!!! He's not gonna die is he? *thorws over balloons, cards, flowers....* get better soon Aten, you've got some Yami ass to kick!!! What's going to happen to Seto? *gasps* lots of questions....*huff*
 Reviewed By: anubiset (too tired to log in)  On: January 29, 2005 14:33 CST
Comment/Review:
I can`t believe what you did. Or rather what Yami did. Someone has to take down that damn pahroah. I feel bad for the Public Relations dept. they are all going to have a hard time dealing with this. Especailly Asher. How about letting Asher have a go at Barnes and then have him sent to the shadow realm to be feasted upong by the dragons. That sounds so good. I hope Ryou is okay. He is just to concerned with everyone else to take care of himself. I wish he could take care of himself once. He really needs it and they don`t need anymore trouble. I can`t wait to see Aten get out of the hospital. He really needs to get better. I love him so much. He and Robbie will be so good for each other. Thanks for the pluchie and please keep up the good work. I don`t know what I would do if you stopped. I`m so used to these characters that they seem to be a part of my life.
 Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye @_@  On: January 29, 2005 13:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Why you little.....*chases bakurasgirl with the millenium spork* You Can't leave it there!! Not fair!! Not fair!! You, my girl, are evil....
 Title: eeeeekkkkkkkkk!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: ShadowofLight  On: January 29, 2005 12:46 CST
Comment/Review:
oh for once i believe in ashar!! plz i wanna help burn the plolice office down with sgt barners in it!! plzplzplz i'll do anything!!!!!!!!!! but i don't blame glenn but he's known seto for a while the guy would never do that!!!! and plz don't let ryou's heart go back or aten die yet!! it's way too soon!! damn you yami, damn you straight into the deepest pit of hell!!!!!! damnit where's my nightmare wheel card?!?!?! i'll run him through it until he screams for mercy!!!!
 Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl  On: January 29, 2005 02:43 CST
Comment/Review:
Ugly combination of colors, ahh! Stupid Yami! Die again! *narrows eyes at Yami* He's messing everything up, stupid evil bastard! *prepares to use Yami as a dart board, with an unlimited supply of sharp poisonous chopsticks of doom and destruction that are deadly accurate* Mwahahahahahaha! lol. Poor Glenn, he's getting hurt and he's so confused. I hope he's not dead, but I have a feeling he might, knowing your evilness. lol. Odion's presence seems interesting; he detects Yami's presence, hope he'll be of help. That priest guy is going to be bad news; and I also prophesize that more bad events are yet to occur. lol. Robbie brought the pretty rings, can't wait til he proposes. ^_^ See ya. ^_~
 Reviewed By: Sakiyama [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 27, 2005 20:38 CST
Comment/Review:
nonononono!! let Glenn live! LET HIM LIVEEEEE!!! I hate Yami so much! Grrr he makes me sooo mad..I hope something horrible happens to him. I love Robbie's rings though! I can't wait to see him do that. Hopefully Odion will pinpoint Yami for everyone and then he can die!! I can't wait to read more. *goes to find something to kill Yami with*
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