| "Unexpected Ally" Reviews/Comments [ 76 ] |
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Reviewed By: kiune_hanyou(not logged on) On: February 02, 2005 17:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nooo!! I just read this whole thing and was like. 'Man this is cool! Whats gonna happen?!!!' Please continue, this was great!
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: February 01, 2005 18:49 CST
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UH OH.... soooo is that how the reikai tantei are gonna meet him? When he searches for Kagome?
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Title: Inspector
Reviewed By: Aniphx On: January 31, 2005 05:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I gave it all tens, mostly cause your writing is superior to me. But there were also some key things I liked. First off, your descriptions are very realistic. Like I said to you once I could almost smell the mucus from that salamander. Second, you did your research. You went through the trouble of not only finding out the Japanese names of things, but also you gave us unknowing folks some definitions of them. And on top of that you have pulled out the character's psyche as well. You have written their personality as it was meant in the anime and mangas. I say this is an excellent piece of work that truly shows how much skill you have in the craft. Great work.
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Reviewed By: ~HIEI LOVERS~ On: January 23, 2005 09:54 CST
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Hey I liked your story a lot and what did you mean bye'readers are like chocolate to a story' what did you mean I'm confused, but I like that feeling. I like your story and update soon. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 09:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good. I like that you have seperaters in between. Some people just have spacers wich are some times really hard to catch ig you're into the story enough.
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Reviewed By: Johnny Walker On: January 17, 2005 16:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very creative, very easy to follow, (too many Japanese words) but makes alot of sense, very interesting plot.
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Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 13:01 CST
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Het I'll keep on reading I don't care what pairings it is as long as it's interesting or even if it's not interesting I will still read and review. So do not worry I am always with ya.
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Title: OMGoddess!
Reviewed By: Hoseki On: January 16, 2005 03:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like OMGoddess! This fic is like totally cool! *ahem* Thta was my sad attempt to be a fangirl, so I shall stop :) Anywho, since I have read all your chaps thus far, I feel I should leave a lil something something for ya here ^___^ You know your work is good, and you know I'd tell you otherwise if need be. You are a kick ass fic-ka and *snaps that whip* *chuckles at the thought of that song* you better keep spitting out these great chapters asap! .....have you ever noticed when I leave reviews they all end up sounding threatening? heh Ah well, You know me ^___~ *glomps* *nibbles* Lata ^____~
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Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 19:30 CST
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This was just starting to get better. I really hope you update soon. Not to put the pressure on you, but may you please update....maybe....once a week. Please? ^_^
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Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 19:07 CST
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It was cool. Hope ya updaet soon.
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Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 13:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was great.
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Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 13:16 CST
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This is a cool story. Hope ya update soon and let Kagome be paired with Hiei please. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Inuluvr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2004 01:21 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE! This story is good and I want to find out what happens next! ^_^
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Reviewed By: DeepBlue1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 15:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep trying and i might be nice to give you a 10.
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2004 20:29 CST
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Hm, please continue this soon! I can't wait to see where it leads!
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