| "Monkeyman" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Nacht Kind On: August 06, 2007 10:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, it's been a long time since I've read DBZ. Luckily, I remembered reading you before, so I tracked you down. I wanted to ask, but you don't seem to have all of your stories up, even at AFF(you only have two there). Is there a specific reason, like admin removal, or was it your decision as author? If there's any place with all of them, I'd love to know. Your stories always made me smile....rather perversely, but a smile nonetheless. Nacht
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Reviewed By: Katiefoolery [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 03:56 CDT
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That was a most enjoyable story. It was nicely built up towards a well-written lemon and you couldn't ask for more, really. I loved the whole inner monologue Vegeta had going throughout this entire story - it worked well to add humour and also a little insight to the tale. I think my favourite part of it was Goku/Kakarot's reaction to Vegeta stroking his tail - I loved that nuzzling! Heh - Vegeat should have known you need to be careful of your actions when you're dealing with someone who obviously doesn't speak much.
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 07:42 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This was just hot, there is nothing else I can say. Very nice
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Reviewed By: Keta master of shadows [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, you are worth my time.
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Reviewed By: StarbearerTM [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 15:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was thoroughly entertained by this! Goku as a Tarzan type fits his nature perfectly. I can just imagine Vegeta getting all hot and bothered, and then getting frustrated all at the same time by Kakkarot's advances. I wonder what happens next?
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Reviewed By: tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 02:24 CST
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It is a great start. I want to know what happens next. Will they be able to talk, how long will Kakarot keep Vegeta, will there be more lemon, why was Vegeta out in the wilds to begin with? Great first fic, you made it interesting and fun. Loved Vegeta talking to himself and Chichi's death was very amusing.
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Reviewed By: sango-chen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 01:52 CST
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I- I I... He- *begins sobbing* SO BEAUTIFUL!!! and when i downloaded that song it made me want to dance obnoxiously... i blame you
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Reviewed By: Webtester01 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 16:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Interesting. I wonder how Kakarot learnd how to do the things he did. Write more.
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