| "Ghostly Ambition" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: parvatilotus [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2011 20:12 EDT
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Been 6 years since I last read through this series and it still kept me gripping my mug of hot tea, unsipped till it was room temp, lmao I didnt even realize i read the whole thing before I took a sip... I hope you write more, especially since the anime wrapped up, I want to read what your fertile imagination dreams up for the Inu-tachi... Come back and write durn it! |
Title: Excellent Series
Reviewed By: Murasaki-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 00:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an enjoyable series! Yes, it could be an anime episode: it has the comedy, characterization, thoughtfulness, and SwordSwinging! I do hope that someday you settle on a plot for that next story--I'd love to read it.
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Reviewed By: Murasaki-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 00:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow! I've really enjoyed these stories. I'm a sucker for action too, and I really like the way you've given us insightful characterization along with the sword-swinging. I particularly liked your portrayal of Sango, and your InuYasha was very good too. Thanks so much for the great read.
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Title: Washuu Ogami
Reviewed By: Washuu Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 00:57 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, you certainly know how to put our beloved cadre through the grist mill!!! But considering the time period they're fighting in,and all the supernaturals roaming the Japanese island in droves, this was quite plausible...and a roller coaster ride!! Great job ::applauds::, and hope to read more from you!
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Reviewed By: Aquamarine [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 03:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read the end of this fic back when MMorg was having issues... then I didn't come back and review when things got better. *Hangs head in shame* ANYWAY... I really did enjoy reading this. It was perfectly suspenseful with just the right amount of fluff. (The epilogue being a perfect example of this.) I liked how you drew the connection between Kagome's experience and Inuyasha's demon issues. It's sad that the whole ordeal affected Shippo and Kagome's relationship, but I'm sure they'll get through it. If ever you chose to write something else, I'll definitly want to read it! Ps - Thank you for defending my poor, abused fic! Your review made me quite happy ^_^
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Reviewed By: parvatilotus [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 02:28 EST
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i loved it all the way through. ENCORE!!
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 06:11 EST
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Yeah!! MM.org finally let me in to leave a review! (Does happy dance) I love this new twist...Sango's past has come back to haunt her...literally. Gives us a new dimension to think about her love life pre-Miroku. Now that Inu is on his way, I wonder...will he be able to fight "Kagome"? And will Kagome, who is still trapped in some void/suspended animation state that looks like her bedroom be able to keep her body from being used like this? Will she be able to stop the spirit that's holding her hostage from hurting Inu? And just how did a demon exterminator become a vengeful ghost that can possess others? Ahh...so many questions. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Aquamarine [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 16:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alas, this story truly deserves to be getting more reviews than it's getting. (Of course, some people have been having trouble leaving reviews, so that's probably why.) The last chapter was very creepy. Poor Kagome. I wonder when they'll figure out this is more than a case of post-traumatic stress. I hope it's before she ends up seriously hurting someone. Anyway, you're doing an excellent job of building suspense, that's for sure!
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 09:46 EST
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Creepy! In a good way! I'm with Inuyasha - after seeing so much destruction and death, Kagome seems to have snapped a bit this time. Not that I blame her. I must admit, that I am utterly confused about what's going on. I must not be as clever as your other reviewers. But I would like to find out. And I'm also hoping that you'll throw some Inu-Kag fluffiness in? I know this is more of a suspense story, but some sweetness to offset the darkness would be appreciated by this devoted Inu-Kag fan! Please update soon. I'll try and put my "thinking cap" on too :)
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Reviewed By: Aquamarine [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 19:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, yeah, something's definitly not right here. Kagome seems to be seeing someone else's memories as well as her own (and I think I know who's). The question is why and how? *Ponders this for a moment* Anyway, this was another great chapter! I'm really enjoying the interactions between all the characters, particularly Inuyasha and Kagome. Shippo has just been adorable and I loved the little side-conversation that Sango and Miroku had while talking to the village head. Can't wait to see what's next! ^_^ ~ Marine
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Reviewed By: Aquamarine [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 15:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an excellent beginning! The prologue was quite creepy. The bad guy just doesn't know when to stay dead, does he? Chapter 1 was fabulous. You have a tallent for building suspense! I was really very worried about Kagome for a moment there... and then I was just confused (not confused about the story, but confused about the bad guy's motivations... What the heck was that all about? I'm sure we'll find out.) I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this story. I'm sure it'll be great, like your others have been. ^_^ ~ Marine
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 02:08 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again, your pull is absolutely amazing! The prologue was great, but now I'm enthralled once again. Please continue doing what you're doing. It's awesome!!
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