| "Death to ass hole wearin' black!" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: Setsuna923 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 15:23 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice...please continue
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Title: Who to choose who to choose
Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 20:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiei or kurama...i dunno both or Hiei if i reeeeeally had to choose...please continue, i really like it
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Reviewed By: Kat1132 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 16:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooohhh fun! I like this girl! She seems so much fun to be around. I would like to see her paired with Hiei. You know the guy who hates her guts, who she hates, and who she hit. This should be very interesting. I hope she can either a)teleport or b) run very, very fast...I don't know if she can yet but then again I doubt she knows either. I can't wait to see where you go with this. It should be interesting no matter which way you go. This will be fun. Can't wait to read more so update soon fool. (Please note that I use the term fool in all playfulness, and by no means want to hurt your feelings. Fool is kind of like a playful nickname between my friends and I. It's all in good fun, but my messages still stands as 'Update soon'! Oh and another thing, just incase I slip in the future: vegetable=bad evil thing, like an insult. Fruit=really good compliment, like fool I guess. Just thought you'd like to know that just in case! BYE FRUIT!
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Reviewed By: Blazing Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 07:51 CST
Comment/Review:
Uhm, more than half of that first chapter sounded almost exactly like another fanfic called "Last Christmas." You do know you could get banned for copying other peoples work, right? >:|
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 18:33 CST
Comment/Review:
wow, um, i think that about covers all the thoughts i have on your fanfic. good start. this is where i say please update soon. and um, good start, keep going.
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