| "Death to ass hole wearin' black!" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Title: Hola
Reviewed By: Kitsune0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2007 06:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Por-favor (Please) continue!
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Title: damn
Reviewed By: Zircrubyon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 18:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn i'm late...oh well.reviewing anyway.plz update if u want.
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Reviewed By: Dj Sarabi On: August 06, 2005 00:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, i thought it was great. i mean that it was enjoyable to read. i would like to read more if you would write sooner, and that is where the 8 comes in. hmm, well, thats all i have to say.
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Title: fuck u reality
Reviewed By: Lil bishi hunter [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 09:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Weee like my title says. this story is great i hope u review soon
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Title: who you should be paired with
Reviewed By: ? On: February 27, 2005 13:38 CST
Comment/Review:
Pair up with Hiei! Oh...and great job on the story.
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Reviewed By: star chan On: February 10, 2005 08:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story ....just simple kurama
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Title: you go girl!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: BG On: January 31, 2005 16:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have guts to hit hiei like that!!!!!!SERIOUSLY!!!!Hes a crasy bitch!!!well good story!!!!!!!!!BYE-BYE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Setsuna923 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 11:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plain and simple...Hiei!
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Reviewed By: Salanti [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 00:41 CST
Comment/Review:
by the way this is going Hiei!
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Reviewed By: Wolf of the Darkness Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2004 20:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Really good Update soon. Vote: Hiei
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Reviewed By: Setsuna923 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 15:23 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice...please continue
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Title: Who to choose who to choose
Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 20:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiei or kurama...i dunno both or Hiei if i reeeeeally had to choose...please continue, i really like it
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Reviewed By: Kat1132 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 16:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooohhh fun! I like this girl! She seems so much fun to be around. I would like to see her paired with Hiei. You know the guy who hates her guts, who she hates, and who she hit. This should be very interesting. I hope she can either a)teleport or b) run very, very fast...I don't know if she can yet but then again I doubt she knows either. I can't wait to see where you go with this. It should be interesting no matter which way you go. This will be fun. Can't wait to read more so update soon fool. (Please note that I use the term fool in all playfulness, and by no means want to hurt your feelings. Fool is kind of like a playful nickname between my friends and I. It's all in good fun, but my messages still stands as 'Update soon'! Oh and another thing, just incase I slip in the future: vegetable=bad evil thing, like an insult. Fruit=really good compliment, like fool I guess. Just thought you'd like to know that just in case! BYE FRUIT!
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Reviewed By: Blazing Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 07:51 CST
Comment/Review:
Uhm, more than half of that first chapter sounded almost exactly like another fanfic called "Last Christmas." You do know you could get banned for copying other peoples work, right? >:|
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 18:33 CST
Comment/Review:
wow, um, i think that about covers all the thoughts i have on your fanfic. good start. this is where i say please update soon. and um, good start, keep going.
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