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Reviewed By: Kimiko-chan On: December 24, 2006 20:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright. what the hell was up with Sango acting like such a whiny bitch? Seriously little miss I'm-a-bad-ass-warrior-chick-and-no-one-can-break-me-down is acting like a fucking whimp. Cuz for someone giving a speech about moving on, she has a hell of alot to learn so she shouldn't be talking. If she pulled that kind of shit at my High-school, she would have gotten her ass kicked before you can say 'help!'Kagome was wrong but she just didnt want to hurt anyone. But as they say: "payback is a bitch" she didnt mean to drag Sango with her and she thought the well would open back up in a few months. I mean I like Sango so plz stop with the bitchiness that is now attacched to her.
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Reviewed By: Kimiko-chan On: December 24, 2006 13:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much! I was about to set Sesshoumaru on striking falcon for leaving thae story hanging like that! Great story. You rock I usually dont like reading about them in athe present but that was awesome I thank you my friend so keep writing for your loyal fans!
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 07:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you did a great job on this! I normally don't enjoy reading about Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru in modern setting, but you did a great job on that. It was interesting, and you had a really cool villain. :) I will check out your other fanfics aswell, because you have a really good writing style. A few spelling mistakes, but nothing big, really. Can't wait to see what else you have written. :D
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Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 09:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent. You did a wonderful job of letting the story flow off of Striking Falcon's story. I truly enjoyed reading each and every chapter. Bravo!!
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Title: Chapter 23
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 11:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome. Update soon. Can't wait to read how they two survive their attacks.
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Title: Yay!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Niamha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 02:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay for an new chapters!!! I was so excited when I got the email but it sucked cause I had to run to class right then so I couldnt read it! I wanted to get out of class so bad! Hahaha you are so amazing I love your writing so much and this story is fantastic! You do Striking Falcon justice. I never could have imagined someone taking a story from her and doing so well. This chapter was great. I KNEW sango was going to sacrifice herself when she thought about it. grrrrr very awesome twist there. I cannot WAIT until your next chapter!!
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Title: Fantastic!
Reviewed By: Niamha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2005 01:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an amazing chapter! It was short but i couldn't imagine a better place to cut it off and you didnt make it drag on for too long. I can't wait for more you are an amazing writer!
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed (not logged in) On: May 23, 2005 11:32 CDT
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He's not really gonna give up Kagome just like that, RIGHT?! He cant! Sesshy loves her too much. & besides Kagome would never go along with it. Sango & Inu? AWWW! kawai!
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Reviewed By: the hitokiri battousai himura On: May 08, 2005 23:46 CDT
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he's not gone rite? RIGHT?!?!?! he cant be gone!!!! kagome has to chose sesshomaru!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!! update!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Jackialioncourt On: April 24, 2005 21:08 CDT
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Fluffy isnt really gone right? right??????????????????????
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Reviewed By: Jackialioncourt On: April 24, 2005 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love how the FF is going....plzzzzzzzz more Fluffy scenes!!!!!!!!!!! Can Kagome stay with Fluffy? He's so lonely...or you could send him over to me ;);)
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Reviewed By: bubbleatea_swthart On: April 24, 2005 01:06 CDT
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so...what's gonna happen now? I thought Kagome was gonna end up with Sesshomaru...is Fluffy-sama gone forever?! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!T_T
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Reviewed By: TheAlmightyAya-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 10:20 CDT
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Yay! so glad to see another chapter!I was sad not to see Sesshy, but interesting plot development with the new weird guy. Will we be learning more about him in the next chapters? Im a bit confused about him. Anyway, keep writing!
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Title: wow....
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: April 09, 2005 23:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
still loveing it and thanks for not leaving the gaps it is kinda hard when i'm reading a fic that isn't as good as yours that just skips it all and goes really really fast well keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Title: wow ...
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i was reading the begining of this fic from Striking Falcon and i just love how your explaining how everything happend keep up the gpood work and update again soon please?
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