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Title: yea something like that!
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi) On: February 21, 2005 23:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea i totally forgot to tell you what i though i think it's ok not to long not to short good work and thanks for reading my fanfic!
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Title: hehehe i'm your editor! ^_^
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (dammit i was signed in!!) On: February 13, 2005 19:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehehehe!!! ^_^ i'm your editor so i give big review for your's and mines work! ^_^ and by the way i only have MEAN_Punk because i've had it longer the InuYashasLoveLorn on mediaminer so next time can you use my name or InuYashasLoveLorn? thankx now go read the e-mail i sent you!!! ^_^ happy V-day!
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Title: awwww......
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was great but.... you really need an editor! really if you want i can be your editor just E-mail me to get into contact with me cuz. your fic really needs some help! ok? but other then that it was great so keep up the good work oh and be4 i 4get my E-mail adress is: MEAN_Punk@kiwibox.com ..... ok so E-mail me i wanna help!!! ^____^
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Title: love the story
Reviewed By: candycorngirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 13:03 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey love the story. Hope that u update soon.
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Reviewed By: inukag4evernadkoukag4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 20:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the plot of the story plz for gods sake update soon.
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 11:51 CST
Comment/Review:
i agree w/ naomi completely n i really like ur story, but dont u think they're goin 2 fast? either way good fic, keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Naomi_Ikahen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 03:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovely plot, though somewhat common. I suggest making your chapters a bit longer and proofreading them. I've noticed a few punctuation and capitalization marks missing here and there. But other than that, this story, so far, is dandy. ;D
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