"Betrothed" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Title: Yey Reviewed By: Morbid-angel On: July 08, 2005 18:17 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I can't wiat to see the next chapter, hopefully you will get it up faster then last time. update soon
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Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 12:13 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: This is really cute so far. I love the fact that you made Kags a bit more daring. I also like the fact that she loved Inu right from the start...although i think i know where you're going with this Kikyou thing...(bad author!) :-D
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Reviewed By: lordurratan On: July 08, 2005 08:30 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: this is a great story. ireally enjoy it. hope you are able to finidh it. good luck.
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Reviewed By: jjhoujh On: July 07, 2005 18:50 CDT Comment/Review: keep write damnit it is good
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Title: wow... Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi) On: May 21, 2005 13:45 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: hiya long time no see? congrats on making flag core! ^__^ keep up your good work! ^__^
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Title: keep it rockin Reviewed By: savii [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 18:33 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i love it keep it going !!!!!
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Title: Nice Reviewed By: animemaster168 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 00:45 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really liked the story so far, i can't wait for the next chapter to be up. I hope it is up soon. AnimeMaster168
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Title: AWESOME Reviewed By: WolfBite [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 17:31 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is an awesome story!! ^_^ I hope you add more soon! Sayoonara!
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Title: yea something like that! Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi) On: February 21, 2005 23:21 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: yea i totally forgot to tell you what i though i think it's ok not to long not to short good work and thanks for reading my fanfic!
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Title: hehehe i'm your editor! ^_^ Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (dammit i was signed in!!) On: February 13, 2005 19:06 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: hehehehe!!! ^_^ i'm your editor so i give big review for your's and mines work! ^_^ and by the way i only have MEAN_Punk because i've had it longer the InuYashasLoveLorn on mediaminer so next time can you use my name or InuYashasLoveLorn? thankx now go read the e-mail i sent you!!! ^_^ happy V-day!
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Title: awwww...... Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 16:17 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: wow that was great but.... you really need an editor! really if you want i can be your editor just E-mail me to get into contact with me cuz. your fic really needs some help! ok? but other then that it was great so keep up the good work oh and be4 i 4get my E-mail adress is: MEAN_Punk@kiwibox.com ..... ok so E-mail me i wanna help!!! ^____^
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Title: love the story Reviewed By: candycorngirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 13:03 CST Comment/Review: Hey love the story. Hope that u update soon.
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Reviewed By: inukag4evernadkoukag4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 20:25 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love the plot of the story plz for gods sake update soon.
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 11:51 CST Comment/Review: i agree w/ naomi completely n i really like ur story, but dont u think they're goin 2 fast? either way good fic, keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Naomi_Ikahen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 03:19 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Lovely plot, though somewhat common. I suggest making your chapters a bit longer and proofreading them. I've noticed a few punctuation and capitalization marks missing here and there. But other than that, this story, so far, is dandy. ;D
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