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Reviewed By: manaleak34 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 16:26 CST
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Personally...I'm realy not that big of fan of lemons and Hentai stuff. Though the writer style is incredible and very well done. I would would mabye give the sejestion to try other withs besides lemons with as much talent as you show here. But keep at it.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 01:03 CST
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you have a really really great story here. the flow of your words is beautiful and chilling at the same time. though i will say the story is a little dark, its perfect in its utter completion. i loved it. i was taken back though by the ending...so many questions. who did Fluffy have a son with if Rin was barren? why was Rin in hell? (fluffy ain't exactly a saint on his own so why did he have to fight to get into hell?) i'm so confused. but the story in itself was absolutly awsome. really great handle on your characters and all. awsome.
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 23:26 CST
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I don't think I've reviewed you in several months, nor have I read much of your work. Terrific job on this, though I wasn't expecting it to be a one shot. I was surprised by Rin's actions, but I don't mean in the bed. I say actions for lack of a better word; her speaking roles, if that works better. I also liked how you incorporated the Inuyasha and Kagome part in there. I should probaby go read "A House Divided," since I've really been meaning to read that. Anyway, great job and keep it up! I think this is one of your best works, but I'm not really one to judge since I'm fuzzy on your other Inuyasha related fanfiction. Good luck with your future works!
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