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Reviewed By: Star keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 23:27 CST
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*is laughing her ass off under the computer desk* she sent him a card that sings Jingle bells!? that was pure GENIUS!! ~~~Starlett~~~
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 07:28 CST
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 07:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lmao the last part wif naraku was absolutely HILARIOUS! lol write a sequel to this! great work!
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 05:01 CST
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MWAHAHAHA!! That ending was hilarious!! It was a really great story, though I too wondered about the whole tossing of the shards away, but hey, yo story, yo way!! Loved it lots!!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 00:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was really cute. And I loved how you told what happened to each character and tied it back to their original history and reasons for joining Inuyasha and Kagome. It was also very funny. You've always been good at adding comedy to character's personality without over doing it. And I loved the way Kagome kept getting on the spirit's nerves. The ending was really sweet too. I made my boyfriend this! Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Veglma [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2004 19:23 CST
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*snicker* This can brighting anyones christmas.
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Title: LMAO!
Reviewed By: Ryu Sachiko Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2004 18:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think I've laughed that much since school ended last year! My xmas has been going horribly, and knowing my insatiable appetite for fanfics I had to risk having my computer shut down during me reading some fics. I think you have made my Christmas all that more happier! I better get off now before the power goes off again! -Ryu Sachiko Sama
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2004 15:02 CST
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That was truly awesome.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2004 14:34 CST
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That was fun. I liked the death charater. I was hoping you would reveal that is was Sesshoumaru. Cause he sure acted like him. The end was great. I wonder what Naraku will get the gang. Later.
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Title: The Christmas Spirit
Reviewed By: Assassin_Chiq [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2004 12:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol yes!! I loved it! Omg I was lmao the whole time! lol, it was great! I have read all your stories, but damn this one was funny!
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Reviewed By: Mangalover13 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2004 12:03 CST
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oh my god! it's so funny!!! i'm on the verge of feeling sorry for Naraku. hahahhahaha! those cards are so annoying! XD
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2004 07:44 CST
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Hojo was in for a shock this year… ~~~ Heh heh heh. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Get out of my room!" ~~~ "(which, admittedly, was just hair spray with the label ripped off. He'd already sprayed Buyo three times that morning. " ~~~ This one made me laugh out loud. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Uh... How could Kagome have returned to the SJ if she'd tossed the shards at Inuyasha's big melon head? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Dear Naraku MUUUWAAAAAAAAAHAHAHHAHHAHAHHAAA!! Oh don't get Naraku started on making those singing greeting cards! He probably invented the things. ~~~ You must submit this story for the BAFFC -- Pimp fiction category.
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