| "Divine Desire: Tainted" Reviews/Comments [ 86 ] |
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Title: AAAACCCKKKK!!!!
Reviewed By: AmericanMiko1112 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I love it! I can't believe you just stopped it like that! Oy! Keep up the good work, ok? UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Doujo (dlg) On: April 06, 2005 17:53 CDT
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hey absolutely great chapter! It's true it was short but I still really love that chapter. Can't wait for the next chapter please update really soon!!
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Title: ReadorDie214
Reviewed By: ReadorDie214 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 11:12 CST
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Great story, even if it is a little confusing. I had to think some parts over but you cleared things up in the AN, i can't wait till the next story! You are so talented and I'm very impress. I still have a question, Fluffy doesn't love Ayame? Because that kind of messed me up. I know that they have a child together and everything. Why did Ayame keep the child knowing how the child was going to grow up? I hope you explain this questions in the next chapter. Please update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: pork chop On: March 27, 2005 20:50 CST
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hey great that ya updated! this chap wasnt boring...kinda shocking a bit... but i liked it!keep up the good work and update soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Doujo (dlg) On: March 26, 2005 14:29 CST
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Great chapter!!! I like the fact that Rin is the younger sister of Sess and Inu, totally original and unique! I like it when that way ^^ I wonder how Rin will react when she'll learn that Kagome has to kill her brother... O.o Update soon!! and for the drawing I didn't start yet... ^^' didn't get the time! But I promise it'll be done before... hum... middle april! ^^
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Reviewed By: Doujo (dlg) On: March 22, 2005 18:33 CST
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That was a great chapter! But I don't want any love triangle with Rin/Sess/Kagura... I more think that Rin is more like a daughter to Sesshy... not a girlfriend... anyway... update soon please! I really love this chapter (like all the others too lol) and I'll try to draw the Ayame/Kouga scene too. I'll do one in color and another in black and white (I don't have photoshop so it'll be a regular drawing, sorry) and you'll tell me which you prefer (if I ever get the time to draw lol) anyway, see ya!
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Reviewed By: gunslinger_inu (lazy, wont login)) On: March 21, 2005 12:54 CST
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That was Great!! write more I think Rin should have a big role and kinda create a love triangle between Sess/Kag/herself.
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Reviewed By: inu-kago-kusa-momi (2 lazy 2 log in) On: March 19, 2005 20:46 CST
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hey sorry I haven't reviewed in a while..-ok it was a long time,a really long time-..I have been very busy with school and my parents are being a pain in the ass..neways..about the chapters..it was awesome..I loved it-as always-..update..update...update...
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Reviewed By: LaDDee_WaRRioR (not logged in) On: March 14, 2005 13:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
DamN !!! Finally the thingy let me type in this damn box ... anyway sorry couldn't review, I was about to review on your email address but I also couldn't do that because of "cookie reject" some stupid thing like that, anyway great story I always like your story plz update soon
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2005 08:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wowyz! i luv this story a ginormous amount! it has a nice refreshing change of storyline, not the same old 'Inuyasha-as-bad-guy-and-falls-in-love-with-the-good-girl-who-is-Kagome' lol well anyway, i hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: GothycCoalChambr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 19:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thanks for another great chappie, hope the next one is posted soon. i'll be waiting for it.
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Reviewed By: not login in On: March 05, 2005 15:45 CST
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I think you should give rin a bigger roll I like to see sess and rin togeter.
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Reviewed By: GothycCoalChambr (logged out) On: February 28, 2005 23:51 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another good chappie, keep them coming. can't wait for the next chappie, please update soon. i know you won't dissapoint!
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Reviewed By: LaDDee_WaRRioR (not logged in) On: February 27, 2005 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Stupid computer won't let me go in my e-mail so I didn't know what has been updated or whatsoever ... anyway still writing great story ...I see ... well please continue with it or disappoint your fan. (sorry if it sounds threatning)
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Reviewed By: Doujo (dlg) On: February 27, 2005 18:13 CST
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that was really good! I hope you'll update soon, I'm happy you know where you're going with the story now ^^ cuz it means maybe you'll update sooner! yay! Well... update soon then lol ^_^
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