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Reviewed By: kagomeme2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 02:03 CST
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ok id like to say i love this story!!!!!!!!!!! plz update soon
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Reviewed By: sisko66002 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story and can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Lya[out logged] On: February 14, 2005 16:59 CST
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weoo i love this story, its so sad and so sweet!!! and yes i would like to read more so i reviewed, and i like the poem that made me! ^__^ whoop whoop
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Reviewed By: AnneMarieh [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 18:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHAHA! I like that little 'poem' you added at the end for us poor readers. It was amusing. I truly like this story. It is very good. There's never been a story like this before, with Hiei being so possessive. But I guess it's just in his nature! ^_^;; I hope you don't mind if I leave long reviews. With all the hard work and effort you put into this story, I think you well deserve it. Is the child Niobi growing close to Hiei or something? It seems she can sense him, and it's obvious that she's just as attached to him as he is to her, if not more than Hiei. Anyways, I hope you update again soon!! I hate waiting forever!! Keep up the good work! Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: psychogirly [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 18:47 CST
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hi! this ficcie is sooo good and i especially like the little "review" poem at the end of CH 4! haha kute.
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Title: OMG!! ONCE AGAIN!
Reviewed By: chibibunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 21:23 CST
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once again you have done such a wonderful job!!! jeeze louize....how do you do it!?? i love it! yay! update soon!! WEEEEE!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 20:02 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I think I need a hug. This is soooooooooooooooooooooo sweet! Update soon. Hiei loves the small girl so much. Did Erik commit sucicide? This has been Kuramas Gurl thank you, goodbye.
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Reviewed By: shanana-cant login On: February 01, 2005 19:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooo very interesting!! possessive huh, that is such a hiei thing, i love this! the feelings seem so real! well keep writing!
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Reviewed By: AineSironaTsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 04:05 CST
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An odd setup, but incredibly well written. I shall be holding my breath for your next update.
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Title: that is so good!
Reviewed By: chibibunny [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 22:52 CST
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wow. poor child! omg...i can't believe that happened. good thing the guys saved her! everything is looking up now, right??? TELL ME ITS SO!!! PLEASE!! UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: shanana-cant login On: January 29, 2005 19:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the best story ive read in a long time. the description of the torture, the feelings or erik, the way the girl feels in her disability, and hiei's point of view is amazing, this is a story you should really keep going! i cant wait!!
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Reviewed By: Lady Dark On: January 20, 2005 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it but its a depressing story but still,I like the way you make Hiei feel when his around her. Good Story Update soon.'kay ^_^. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Rusty Music Box On: January 13, 2005 20:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was compleatly amazing, it is sad to say however I read the story form the person that had plagerized you. And I am proud to say that yours is much much better. You are much more dicriptive and have an awsome way with words. And I felt that you put Hiei perfectly in charecter, or how he would act in that situation. Goob Job! *thumbs up*
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Reviewed By: Lya [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...its just...AWESOME!! i can't wait until the next chapter(s) get up...its so sweet and yet so sad...i was like awww! and then the uncle..and father...O.O just blaaah! but the descriptions of everything (even the gross parts) where perfectly detailed!!!
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Reviewed By: sisko66002 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 13:19 CST
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I love it. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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