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Reviewed By: shanana-cant login On: January 29, 2005 19:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the best story ive read in a long time. the description of the torture, the feelings or erik, the way the girl feels in her disability, and hiei's point of view is amazing, this is a story you should really keep going! i cant wait!!
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Reviewed By: Lady Dark On: January 20, 2005 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it but its a depressing story but still,I like the way you make Hiei feel when his around her. Good Story Update soon.'kay ^_^. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Rusty Music Box On: January 13, 2005 20:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was compleatly amazing, it is sad to say however I read the story form the person that had plagerized you. And I am proud to say that yours is much much better. You are much more dicriptive and have an awsome way with words. And I felt that you put Hiei perfectly in charecter, or how he would act in that situation. Goob Job! *thumbs up*
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Reviewed By: Lya [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...its just...AWESOME!! i can't wait until the next chapter(s) get up...its so sweet and yet so sad...i was like awww! and then the uncle..and father...O.O just blaaah! but the descriptions of everything (even the gross parts) where perfectly detailed!!!
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Reviewed By: sisko66002 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 13:19 CST
Comment/Review:
I love it. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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