| "Possession" Reviews/Comments [ 762 ] |
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Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2008 22:22 PDT
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Holy crap that was an intense chapter ... damn. Wonderfully written.
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Title: Oh, geez....
Reviewed By: Roxotaku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2008 16:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, you just have to continue the angst don't you? Evil, evil, woman! LOL! No wonder KK said she did not like the end of this chapter - poor InuYasha! But I still love this story and pray your muse saves InuYasha - or will someone else save him? Eeek, please don't wait another 6 months to update, I just can't stand the suspense...but I am a writer too, so I understand and will patiently wait for the next chapter...
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2008 01:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And the award for most evil cliffy ever goes to...Weezambu! Fantastic story! My god...this story is just so heart wrenching...it doesn't seem like a happy ending is in store but after all the heartache I hope for Inuyasha and Kagome to have some happiness.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2008 03:58 PDT
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hi, i just found this story and i love it. i hope to read more soon.
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Title: Holy horror, Batman!
Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 23:20 PDT
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Jeez, wheeze! Could you have left us on a worse cliffie? LOL No, no... I know how it is. I'm always apologizing for leaving my stories where they are because the chapter has gotten too long. But seriously, I think there will be a mass suicide if you don't update in sooner than 6 months, lol. (Just teasing ;) ) Anywho, this was a great chapter. I love the back-and-forth between scenes - I use that in some of my own stories as well. Great job with all the angst... The romance was great too, while it lasted (heh). Good luck with this - you're gonna need it! ^_^ -PB
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Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 22:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy shit thats the most frightening visual i have ever read. Oh poor Sango! Thats so horrifying! Its a great story though, I mean the horror truly makes this story take the cake. Wow. I'm so creeped out. Its great though O:
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: April 21, 2008 20:15 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gasp!! Heart is stut-ter-ing, like I've ran six flights of stairs . . . Oh thee with much talent is so very cruel with thy mean cliffhangers. Triple tens to you for such fine writing. I am glad to see Shippo trying to make his way out of living in such misery. I could not be happier with InuYasha and Kagome at least of having gotten a chance at some kind of emotional healing, and a rocky reunion to boot. At least they had something meaningful in the midst of the terrible sea of darkness that they have sailed together. I cannot imagine how Kohaku was trying to achieve anything by sacrificing InuYasha or Kagome. I am still half expecting Sesshoumaru to kick someones a--, for whatever reason he chooses. (We all know that he does not have to have a reason.) I hope it is the monster. I hope he saves InuYasha. Or maybe, Kagome will prove her worth and save InuYasha. I cannot outguess what you will write next. I love the ride in your emotional rollercoaster of a story. Where is the next stop? There are so many directions in this story that I could not possibly guess. Let the ride continue! Thank you for always sharing. Cynbad146(a big happy face and a sigh!)
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Reviewed By: Ninevrise [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 20:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn! That was fantastic! I love how you've developed this story so far, and can't wait for the conclusion. If you ever become a professional writer I will buy your books, cause you ROCK!
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Reviewed By: sublimetrickster [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 15:07 PDT
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DAMN, girl! You know how to speed up a girls heart and rip it out at just the right moment, don't you? As always, happy for a new chapter and a few crumbs from your twisted mind.
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: April 21, 2008 14:39 PDT
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WooooW!! That was a very powerful chapter. I can not wait until you update again. PLEASE Upadate soon.
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Reviewed By: q quill On: April 21, 2008 11:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ew what and ass kohaku has turned into! please don't separate kagome and inuyasha anymore!
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 09:30 PDT
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Okay, this was so worth the wait. :)
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Reviewed By: pewter_wings [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 07:56 PDT
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Kohaku has blood lust, no honor. It is very difficult to not want to see him die right now.
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 06:32 PDT
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I find Kagome's insecurity about being a possession quite believable.
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Title: *gulp*
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 00:29 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was scary...I'm going to sit in a brightly lite room and read sappy shojo manga now...
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