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| "Possession" Reviews/Comments [ 762 ] | | Pages (51): [ « ‹ 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 › » ] | Title: SENSATIONAL!
Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 00:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sobs* God, I love your story! I have read (and reviewed it - several times actually :D under a different user name tho) on adultfanfiction.net but only just found it here, and I just couldn't resist the urge to tell you again what a brilliant story this is! I quite often (as in all the time) get lost in the stories I'm reading, taking on the feelings and emotions of the characters - and I have to say, your story almost has me sobbing with aching and lonliness at the end of just ONE chapter; after several consecutive chapters I almost have to walk away and go find something extremely happy to do, or drown in dispair. ....Well, ok, maybe that's a slight exageration, but not by much. your story is so wonderfully written as well, not just a gripping tale, but beautifully worded and .....just brilliantly done! I think that anyone who reads Inuyasha fanfictions is at a terrible loss if they do not read at least one of your stories - if not this one (altho,as you might guess, I highly recommend it:D)then ust anyone of your stories! another of my ALL time favorites is your "the youkai and the exterminator" which I can't wait to get the chance to go and check out the new updates that I wasn't able to acces for a long time. Hope you update soon, and keep up the good work!!!! :D P.S - I hope that my review made some sense - it's like almost three in the morning, and I am hardly making sense to myself, so I can;t imagine what kind of sense I would be making to someone else. But I think that you'd probablybe able to get the gist of my review anyway :D
| Reviewed By: Amie (NSI) On: April 30, 2006 05:00 PDT
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Enter Kouga! Exciting chapter. I'm glad to see Rin fitting in with Kagome, Shippou and the wolves, but it still seems a little strange that she could be so lighthearted in their midst, after her own experiences and a lifetime of alliance with Sesshoumaru and InuYasha. I have so much sympathy for Kagome and InuYasha - they are both SO damaged. I'm assuming "boss" is Kohaku? His animus towards InuYasha is completely justified, especially if that memory is an accurate one and InuYasha had Sango for a snack. Can this story *get* any better?! Updates make me so ridiculously happy! You're such a great writer, Wheezambu. Thank you for your efforts.
| Reviewed By: Portia (ADarkNightsObsession) On: April 27, 2006 22:14 PDT
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What is this sorrow filled creature. Is it what happened to Inuyashas memories cause there is that yawning emptiness when he tries to remember stuff and it's a soul that is being devoured by demons? (I'm part of that mailing list thingy so this is sort of reacting to the person who thought it was Miroku...which is kinda weird cause his spirit is talking to Kagome, not trapped like this one) So I was just awonderin if you've figured out what it is going to be...or is it like Naraku/Onigumos soul or something???...I don't know...all I do know is that...YOU MUST UPDATE OR I SHALL SWALLOW YOUR BRAIN...wait no that would mean you wouldn't be able to update...fine...Update or i shall...TIE YOU UP AND COVER YOUR FEET WITH RABID FERRETS OF DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!!!!!... I love you!
| Reviewed By: DarklessVasion (nsi) On: April 22, 2006 22:19 PDT
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Excellent as usual. Very nice...the virulent voices prodding InuYasha towards hate and madness; the very demon souls trapped upon the creation of the Shikon no Tama. Can that trapped human soul haunting them...be Midoriko? An eternity of fighting and aloneness within the jewel's confines...how horrible. Simply splendid.
| Title: Teriffic fic
Reviewed By: Nanoda [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 02:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I give this 10/10 for all; Possession is one of the most gripping InuYasha fics I've read. (Sueric's 'Purity' and Terri Botta's 'Lucky Ones' being the only other two I've liked close to this much). I have to say I didn't want to read it at first, 'cause it sure seemed like it would end up quite depressingly, but you've got some world-class writing happening, and now I'm hooked. ;) I've read this for two evenings straight on AFF (using Google cache when it went down), then switching here to Mediaminer when I found out to my excitement that it had 3 more chapters! Of course, now that I'm all caught up, and have only excruciating waits to look forward to. ;) What to say... (Excuse my lack of coherancy as it's 3AM) Your writing is of top caliber; I'm always absorbed by the story as there's no mis-spellings, misuse of grammar, or OOC moments. The transformation of the characters is intimate and believable. (Two parts especially: when Inuyasha has lost Kagome his anguish at failing to kill himself had me in tears, and the passage as Kagome instinctivly tries the 'sit' command and is awaiting Inuyasha's reaction was intense). I can't wait to read the next chapters - Kagome's in the past - can she affect the future and prevent these events? (Probably not, too 'happy'). She clearly never stopped loving InuYasha, especially as he once was, and is sometimes now close to being again. Inuyasha always and still has feelings for Kagome, even if they were twisted by losing part of himself to be replaced with something evil. I think I can see that Kagome could forgive Inuyasha (especially knowing the truth), but what would Inuyasha do to himself under the same circumstances? So basically I love it, and encourage you to post furthur updates within a finite quantity of time! ;)
| Reviewed By: morbidreviewer On: April 20, 2006 01:51 PDT
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hey, would the rosary come back? will kag get screwedly pregnant again? would she be brought back into the castle? would sessh (gasps!) like kagome?(would he get into the picture later in the first place?)
| Title: YOUR STORY ROX
Reviewed By: Koga or Kouga/ Kouga's Girl On: April 19, 2006 16:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG KEEP GOING YOUR STORY IS SO GOOD, I HAVE MY OWN BUT IT DOSENT NEAR COMPARE TO YOURS, MY STORY'S NAME IS... ...THE SEASON OF NEW LOVE IF YOU WANT TO YOU COULD TAKE A LOOK AT IT IF YOU HAD THE TIME AND TELL ME WHAT YOU THING THANKS KOGA OR KOUGA/ KOUGA'S GIRL (YEAH IM OBSESSED WITH KOUGA)
| Reviewed By: MidnightsKeeper (not logged in) On: April 18, 2006 21:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i don't think it's ever taken me this long to read any story or book, ever. luckily for me it's a really good story. worth the wait between updates. another amazing chapter. great job, can't wait for the next one. hope it comes soon. oh, i've been meaning to say it for awhile, but kept forgetting; i like how you put miroku into the story. he adds some comic relief to an otherwise very depressing fic. any chance of sango making an appearance too? will inuyasha ever find out about the miscarriage? so many questions! at least he's finally remembering a little bit.
| Title: ch 25
Reviewed By: velvetarms77 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 08:26 PDT
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It's heartwrenching to read all of the angst! You read into the characters and their psyches so well, and relay their pain and confusion with brutal realism. I'm looking forward to seeing what you have in store for them in future chapters.
| Reviewed By: gracemis On: April 17, 2006 22:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been a lurker for awhile, reading this fic and some of your others. This is a very original piece and very enjoyable. I'm happy to see the progression of Kagome "back" to herself. You have done a wonderful job of taking an extremely broken yet powerful and ruthless version of Kagome and shown us both the path to how she became that person and how she is finding her way back to her own happiness (acceptance of self and others). Going back and forth in time must have been really hard to write. But you pulled it off beautifully keeping readers (such as me) engaged in both stories. I will continue to look forward to your updates. Good luck with "real life" too.
| Reviewed By: Mys C On: April 17, 2006 20:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh!!!GREAT CHAPTER!!! Keep on keeping on...:] Update sooon please!
| Reviewed By: adea neri On: April 17, 2006 15:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok after soooooo long you leave me with that ending. are you insane. wait no thats me. im bitting my nails waiting for the next update.
| Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: April 17, 2006 10:05 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wheezambu, your chapters never disappoint me. I cannot imagine anyone leaving a complaint in your reviews. Some phrases or parts, that I was really entertained by, are: "pit hounds," pretty accurate; "pooled in his armpits," gave me an erie feeling; "human soul trapped with in a seething mass of demons," sounded scary and tortured. I really liked the scene where Kagome told InuYasha to "sit" and nothing physically happened, but emotionally/mentally there was an explosion. Actually, I liked it when InuYasha told Kagome to "shut up." Not that I like InuYasha putting her down, but once in a while, she needs help in getting her temper/emotions in check. I say again, great chapter! Cynbad146
| Title: ch 25
Reviewed By: LavenderRose(nsi) On: April 17, 2006 08:17 PDT
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Squee! Another awesome chapter! You've given just enough information about the boss to put the willies out in force. How did the mass become tangible? And does this mean the jewel was never destroyed in the first place? I know, I know, wait and see...evil, evil, evil!
| Reviewed By: sailor saturn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 06:44 PDT
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O___O oh dear lord... this story is so gripping! i feel so bad for InuYasha and Kagome! *tear* please PLEASE make it have a happy ending!! PLEASE! i hate sad endings always thinking what could have happened... well update asap! ^-^
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