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Reviewed By: julimoonstar On: November 30, 2001 22:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story update it soon. PLEASE. |
Reviewed By: Nikki *_* On: November 26, 2001 20:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, must say that is a really well written fic. I can't wait for the next chapter. I like the whole idea of Trunks discovering Pan was the girl in his dreams. But i completely *LOVED* the part when Vegeta comes to take Bulma away! It just showed so much love. It was really sweet. Anyway, I think the only part I didn't like, was when Trunks "did his thing" or whatever. grr...nasty Very good job on this, oh and keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: mia On: November 23, 2001 14:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it totally great, can't wait for the 5th chapter ... pan & trunks are my favorite couple and i love how you word your stories ^__^ GREAT FIC /\_/\
=(^.^)= can't wait for the rest ... |
Reviewed By: littlemoonhime - bunny On: October 22, 2001 20:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great story!! Please update soon!! |
Reviewed By: karena On: October 23, 2001 12:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
really like this story. i'll be looking for more. |
Reviewed By: Trunksloverpan On: October 25, 2001 16:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is so cool update very soon!! Ja Na! |
Reviewed By: littlemoonhime On: October 26, 2001 14:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
OOOOHHhhhhh!!! I just LOVE THIS FICCY!!! Please update ASAP, I'm just DYING to know what'll happen next!! ACK!! |
Reviewed By: tom On: October 26, 2001 18:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
great story hope the next chapter comes out soon. |
Reviewed By: juliemoonstar On: October 28, 2001 18:21 CST
Comment/Review:
I JUST LOVE THIS STORY.OH I JUST CAN'T WAIT TILL IT IS DONE PLEASE FINISH SOON JA'NE. |
Reviewed By: Max On: October 30, 2001 01:29 CST
Comment/Review:
Excellent Story about my favorite couple please continue |
Reviewed By: Flecia On: October 31, 2001 02:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Great Story PLEASE UPDATE!!! |
Reviewed By: littlemoonhime On: November 05, 2001 18:33 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG!! I can't believe Panny had to put up with Trunks "doing his thing" to that b*** girlfriend of HIS!! ACK!! they BONDED!! OMG!! I just love this fic!! I can't wait to see what will happen next!! Please update soon ;D |
Reviewed By: maria On: November 06, 2001 12:05 CST
Comment/Review:
i loved it, it is so sweet and romantic. i hope you write more chapters of it. If so i look forward to reading them.
^_^ great fan-fic |
Reviewed By: mia On: November 09, 2001 15:18 CST
Comment/Review:
i love the fic please please ( on knees begging) finish it i can't wait contact me when it's done i can't wait (jumping up and down) e-mail me at kitty477@hotmail.com |
Reviewed By: julie jonston On: November 10, 2001 09:51 CST
Comment/Review:
i love this fic. please finish it soon. when you update e-mail me at pikagirl_25@yahoo.com. ja'ne
p.s please update soon. |
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