| "Family: The Story of S and N" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Title: MeLaiya
Reviewed By: MeLaiya [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 09:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved, it. please keep up the good worka and update soon. Cant wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Stefni [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2006 00:51 EST
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I'm really enjoying this. I can't wait to see how Sasuke reacts when he finds out that the kids are his.
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Reviewed By: Mysic_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2006 08:12 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh please update soon. I just got to know what happens when they find out who the other parent is. What will Sasuke do??? What will Naruto do?? Oh please don't leave us hanging like this.
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Reviewed By: Mysic_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 23:10 EST
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I really like your story. I hope that you update soon.
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Reviewed By: kpkchq [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 17:49 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz plz plz plz update soon!! im melting!!
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Reviewed By: Mad4anime [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 17:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^-^!!!! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!! Ok... this is a really really really late review but yeah! Still! I love and please please UPDATE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kyo crossover anime [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 21:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Very oringal. Ypu better update.
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Reviewed By: rose/anime On: October 01, 2005 05:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
the first read time i read this i don't believe that someone could think naruto is getting pregnant but there it goes. i hope you update it soon.
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Title: Oh, I forgot...
Reviewed By: Choi sama On: August 14, 2005 13:52 EDT
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I just scanned over the reviews, and the dude is right. Making character bios is great and stuff, but making us read through all that isn't so cool. (Unless "us" is Japanese folks or speed readers.) I think the best thing to do (since you obviously put some effort into that) is keep that as "Character Bio" and make/request a colored fanart we can just look at. Then, it's easy and you don't lose all that good, inspired work. =) PS: I think I can make a fanart for you (I can draw OK.) but it might turn out a little different that what you have in mind. Just be specific and I'll do my best.
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Title: Naruto is a stamina freak...
Reviewed By: Choi sama On: August 14, 2005 13:47 EDT
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...and I'm not. Sorry for the crappy review, but I'm dead-tired. I loved this though, even if it's not Naruto-ish, it seems like a Naruto that could come to be... Good job, and keep updating.
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Reviewed By: Sonia360 On: March 24, 2005 19:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon,cant wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: kayoko_chan On: January 15, 2005 20:17 EST
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the story is actually quite interesting. I'd almost wished you actually talked about Naruto's pregnancy and raising the kids. One thing that you definitely need to fix is the prologue. Doing character descriptions like that is great for your own reference whe you're writing the story, but not as an actual chapter. It's just not very attractive way to present the story. Instead, try to incorporate a few descriptions here and there instead of stating all the OC's stats in one chapter. Other then that, i look forward to reading more. Feel free to email me at kayoko_0_chan@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Engel du Mal On: January 14, 2005 14:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Continue! Continue! Please ^-^
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Reviewed By: Cristin@ On: January 13, 2005 23:52 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhh myyy god!!!!! Great...I love it. Man how Sasuke felt when Naru was gone, uuuh author talk to me!!! I need answers just like the other review. Okay is Naru a missing-in? Whats going to happen next....please up date soon, this story is very interesting.
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 03:19 EST
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Is that it? What's going to happen next? When did he meet his new friends, why, how, where, and what made them meet each other? What about Sasuke? And the people at Konoha village? So many questions and I demand answers, please? Interesting fic. Great start. Keep up the good work. coolsa.
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