| "To destroy the one you love" Reviews/Comments [ 107 ] |
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Reviewed By: AolaniDathomir [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 14:46 CST
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*claps* Another amazing chapter (although you can pick up that it's a different writing style...great job, Nix). It was long too! I really like the way Aya-chan was written, very strong and determined (the Fujimiya family trait apparently). I hope Ran finally realized what an idiot he was (seems like he might have), and I hope he can get Youji back safely (or at least in patchable pieces). Question is, if he has to tell Ken and Omi what he's done and how they'll react. Or how Aya-chan or Manx or Birman will...can't wait for the next installment. Props to Nix for the awesome chapter and Raven for having such a good writer to help you out.
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Reviewed By: weisslover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 11:16 CST
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he he he..much better this time. Wonderful can't wait for more. Pretty smart actually to not comment ;-) Ally
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Reviewed By: jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2005 19:24 CST
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Please pass along kudos to Nix for a well done chapter! Good to see Aya-chan slap Ran upside the head with reality. Bad enough he did what he did (which will be interesting to see how you get everyone - Yohji & Readers alike - to forgive him if that's the direction you go), but now he's being a total a$$ about it and calling Yohji all kinds of things, whether deserved or not.
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Reviewed By: zelda-13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2005 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*jumps for joy and pleads for more* more plzzzzzzzz very good chap even thoue u didnt write it it fits really really good. *looks up at u with her large chibi eyes* more plzz
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2005 18:15 CST
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Hahaha, a joygasm over a kid?! That's hilarious. Anyway, okay, so wow beautifully written Nix chapter. Can't wait for your next chapter and wow Aya-chan is kickass. I too usually am not much for her, but this girl is not a waif, not in this fic damnit! ^_^ Happy day for the story-ness continuing, and I can't wait to see what happens with Schu, Yohji and Aya. Cause those boys really need to work things out. Hehehe, like who gets to bend Yohji over first ~_^ Okay, happy writings! Bon chance and all ^_^
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Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel On: March 05, 2005 21:39 CST
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poor ran even if you deserve the guilty subconsious! mann i hate wakes theyre sooo emotional!
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Reviewed By: Forsaken (too lazy to log in) On: March 03, 2005 22:05 CST
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Well, I'm glad that Aya isn't finding any rest even in his subconscious. Though circumstances prompted him to cooperate with Schu, his reasoning behind it all is excusable and deserving of much guilt. Regret and realization may finally take seed within him in the future, but it's going to be too late to save Yohji from Schu's wicked plot (not that I'm complaining! ^^). I really can't say that I feel sorry for Aya right now. I can only hope that he's able to get to Yohji before Schu breaks him - which I'm glad will not be an easy task for our sly German. ^^ Good luck with the upcoming chapter. I'll be watching out for it.
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Reviewed By: Harmony Glory On: March 03, 2005 20:55 CST
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Too short! *grins* It was good though. It's great to see how haunted Aya is, even in his dreams. Was it Schu induced guilt? Don't know, but it was well deserved just the same. After all, he's done the unthinkable and being torn up about it is exactly what he deserves. Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: AolaniDathomir [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 07:10 CST
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Aww, short chapter. Poor Ran-nii, maybe this is the start of him getting it together? Pretty accurate dream though, what with the events that have gone on. Oh, and on the morning of Youji's wake too, what a dream to have. If you don't write Nagi in, I'll cope (but I really love him ~_^). I really am liking this story, and the only thing about urging you to continue is that it will bring on the end faster. Regardless, you update fairly often, which is great (it sucks being kept in suspense).
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 19:01 CST
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I'm glad Ran is beginning to realize the horror of what he did -- I wonder if the dream is entirely the result of a guilty conscience or if there was a little assistance from Schu? Given his general trouble handling guilt, it is hard to see how he can cope with his action here, even though it was to save his sister. I loved Yohji's escape attempt. Crossing my fingers that it will all work out, and looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: zelda-13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW... thats all i can say. plzzz write more i want to know what happenes.* hugs u so u cant leave * write more * whines* plzz?? * looks up at u with chibi eyes*
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Reviewed By: weisslover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 10:08 CST
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How do you keep telling the same person the same thing without sounding redundent?? Good question huh. Ah well hanging by every written/typed word.As much as I love your writing, you really need to be spanked for that tease of a chapter. LOL
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 09:19 CST
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Been a bit since I reviewed. Not cause your fic lost my interest. Nope, it was because I have the attention span of a gnat, and EVERYtime I'm about to review it and all, some shiny object comes into my field of vision and I get distracted. Moving on: this fic is so great!!! Yay fic of despair! Okay, shutting up now. By the way, I might put up the nameless, genderless, non-existent child for adoption if your fiancee has issues with you having had a non-existent kid with me ^_^
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Reviewed By: Forsaken (too lazy to log in) On: February 26, 2005 23:56 CST
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Oh, things are getting very serious now. *claps in delight* I loved how Yohji was able to keep his wits around Schu - not an easy thing to do. I'm a bit worried about Crawford's probable intervention, but I'm hoping that Schu - although the bad guy here - will manage to maintain control over the situation he's so cleverly created. I'm curious to see what Schu's plans for Yohji are - aside from the obvious - and how deep his feelings are towards him. Is it really just desire to play with a new toy? Or is it more? And, Yohji is going to be a tough nut to crack, will he use Aya's betrayal as a means to get through Yohji's defenses? Gah! So many unanswered questions! But I'm sure that you'll eventually answer them (I hope). I just have to be patient (yeah, right ^.~). As always, I wish you luck with the next chapter. I'll definitely be on the look out for it. ^^
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Reviewed By: Harmony Glory On: February 26, 2005 23:21 CST
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Yay! Some Yohji and Schuldig interaction! Yohji should definitely be afraid. I really wonder what Schuldig's intentions are and whether he'll be able to prevent Crawford (not to mention Farf) from doing away with Yohji. After all, he didn't go through all the trouble of blackmailing Aya in order to lose Yohji now. I can't wait for the real 'fun' to begin. ^^ See you next time...
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