| "Cats, Crutches and Babies? Oh My!" Reviews/Comments [ 134 ] |
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Reviewed By: YAOIFANGUY06 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 14:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am sorry I wasn't able to review the last couple of chapters, but then again, Why would I write a review to perfection. Anyways it's good to see you have updated since my computer crashed and I loved this last chapter. I couldn't wait until I seen some kind of action between ryu-san and tatsuha-kun. I was re-reading hte whole story last night and it is just unbelieveable how you write. Everything just flows from chapter to chapter. It's like that one shoe that fits your feet perfectly and curves just in the places you want it to curve. Anyways it was a good chapter and I am glad that I am able to read it. Keep posting. Love Yas, Adam p.s. ::kiss kiss::
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Reviewed By: Mill On: November 23, 2005 12:26 CST
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HELL YA! BEST PROPOSAL EVER!! KICKASS! LOL
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Reviewed By: lain_chan16 On: November 06, 2005 11:01 CST
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O_O omfg! how can you just leave off on Ryu and Tatsuha like that!!! :'( jk! =P awesome chapter! it's cute that Shuichi's gonna get Yuki a car ^.^ Later!
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Reviewed By: Traumatic BunnyRabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 18:34 CST
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The hell with lemon! Your story is good even without smut (but I still hope to see some hot moments soon;)) And this Porshe idea... I've got bad feeling. Shu buying surprise gift - somehow it sounds like a disaster ^__^ But I'm sure you'll help him make Yuki happy. Anyway, get some proper sleep and get rest so you can write again. =3
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Reviewed By: DemonicKareBear(to lazy to log in) On: November 05, 2005 08:06 CST
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YOU UPDATED! I love you, because you are the greatest and you need to praised. Though I do have to point out a fault, you dont update fast enough. I know that life can somethimes rule out fanfiction writing I understand that but still... I can still dream. Oh and I am so happy that more Ryu/Tat was put in the chapter. And when I read about Shu giving Yuki a car... well I couldnt help but think of a gameshow. I guess that it dosent help that I am watching 'The Price Is Right' at the moment as well as reading dose it? Its going to be interesting what happens. And I wont have to guess if you update sooner! Please? -Puppy dog eyes-
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Reviewed By: Angela On: November 04, 2005 22:32 CST
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So tired... Yuki isn't Bi-polar! Not even close! I want to sleep! You should post more often. If you don't post enough people will forget what happend in the last chapter! Great chapter! Now I must go and find a quote to start my essay off with! Our teacher is nice and pretty much tells us what the essays about!
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Reviewed By: annoymous On: November 04, 2005 15:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story and you have no life i well i doent eat cause i doent have a life either (i eat but i eat verry littel like luch is some fries and i eat halloween candy that is about all now i am dapressed write more you are good
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Reviewed By: Belle (to lazy to log in again) On: November 04, 2005 15:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it and I am soooooooooooooo very, very happy for Ryu and tatsuah na no da! Yay! Keep up the super spectacular job and I will be here cheering you on. Yay for Yaoi! Love those Lemons! Yaaaaaaaaay! You rock. Bye now! Je ne.
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Reviewed By: Serenitychan13 (too bummin' lazy to log in) On: November 03, 2005 18:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!! I LOVE THIS FIC! I just started it today and read it all the way through... I LOVE IT! Please update!!!
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Reviewed By: lain_chan16 On: November 01, 2005 20:02 CST
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aww! I just read your lil explantation thing of why you haven't updated, that is so sucky!! *hugs* I thought you abandoned your readers of something =P im glad you didnt ^_^
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Reviewed By: gravifan On: October 19, 2005 14:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU MUST UPDATE SOON!!!!every day when i come home from school i ceck but nothing!please explain that to me!!!!!!!any way luv ur fic update soon
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Reviewed By: DemonicKareBear [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had to make an account just to review you! But thats okay.. now at least your on my favorites list! I am so so SO happy that you updated.. I was begining to wonder if you were! I checked every day I could(Which was about every other day) I AM SO HAPPY THAT YOU UPDATED AND ADDED MORE RYU/TAT! You are now eternally loved. Not that you werent before.. but you get the idea.
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Reviewed By: gravifan On: October 04, 2005 06:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a mega awsome fic!i luv it up date fast!!!
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Reviewed By: grvifan On: September 25, 2005 07:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic update quickly!!!!!!
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE!!!
Reviewed By: Belle ( too lazy to sign in) On: September 24, 2005 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Earlier you said that you have read fanfiction better than what you have been writing here and I say you should give titles so I can see if they truly exist which I sincerely doubt. I mean, is it even possible to have a gravitation fic better than this? Hell no! pardon my language but I am seriouse, you beyond rock and even minus the lemon, it was amazing! I love the whole story and you must review because if you don't I'll cry! WAAAAAH! see? I'm crying. HURRY!
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