| "What Revenge Brings" Reviews/Comments [ 89 ] |
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Reviewed By: Azn_Sakura_Blossom On: April 29, 2006 12:50 CDT
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Please Update! I've been waiting forever to read the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Devilangel620 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2006 20:13 CST
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i also read this on the other site. this is a really good story! I hope you update soon! the pocky thing was funny. laterz
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf5 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 14:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pocky... *comes back w/ my own stash* tnx for reminding me to buy more POCKY!!! luv dat stuff.. good chappie, review kinda pointless but update soon!
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Title: Pocky!!!
Reviewed By: Tokyogurl1 On: December 29, 2005 01:43 CST
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hee hee that was sooo cool! I loved it! I hope you update soon hee hee Kagome woke up just because of Pocky. hee hee then again, i think I would too. Even if it was strawberry. well again I hope you update soon laterz. Tokyogurl1
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Title: Pocky!!!
Reviewed By: Ame_No_Okami On: December 29, 2005 01:41 CST
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hee hee that was sooo cool! I loved it! I hope you update soon hee hee Kagome woke up just because of Pocky. hee hee then again, i think I would too. Even if it was strawberry. well again I hope you update soon laterz. Ame No Okami
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Reviewed By: girl_disturbed [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 05:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think it's a very nice fan fic^^ actually i've been searching for fics that are like that for quite sometime i'm glad i found one here^^. keep up the good work.ehem. you know a little three some would not hurt ^_~. i plan on making threesomes on my fic as well. just a suggestion though. keep it up! i hope there are updates soon^^
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Reviewed By: Cattra [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2005 20:17 CST
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Since you pleaded so nicely, I'll review. I'm enjoying the fic; it's not like anything that I've seen before. I'm not that familiar with Yu Yu Hakasho, so I've had to look up characters. The idea is cool enough that the research doesn't bother me. Keep up the good work; I'm interested in finding out where all of this is going.
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 17:24 CDT
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Ahhh very interesting chapter, can't wait to read the next one. Update soon please.
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Title: what revenge brings
Reviewed By: Sexi3_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2005 11:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, thats good! plz continue to update a.s.a.p!! i think i might miss this, cuz i kind of scan through the story, but is kagome already mated? i mean i knew she had sex, but is she mated? if not, i was wondering can u pair kagome up with hiei? those two r perfect for each other, don't u think, so? anyways, update asap!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Legoloras On: September 21, 2005 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow i was amazed i really liked it and i cant wait for the next update please keep writeing i love this story :D
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Title: What Revenge Brings
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 17:57 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? Can the pairing be Sess and Kagome please?
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Reviewed By: anaki (nli) On: September 19, 2005 21:33 CDT
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finally! ya updated! it's about time too! love the new chappie! update soon!
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Title: What Revenge Brings
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 22:44 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Tokyogurl1 On: September 05, 2005 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! That was soo good. I mean I liked it.... Well anyways I hope you update really soon. And Inuyasha and Kuwabara could be bros. HAHAHAHAHAHA and that is just wrong about thinking kissing brothers. *shiver* But Kagome and Hiten doing that. I like that. Too bad for that fox Demon dude though. He sounded cute coughhotcough and all. well I hope you update soon. Later Tokyogurl1
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2005 07:30 CDT
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I commend you for going outside of the ordinary on your torture scene, honestly I don't see how someone could technically complain about it. There wasn't anything exceptionally graphic, just different. If someone complains ignore them, they have no sense of humor I swear. Perhaps the next person to be tortured could be Inuyasha? In some way, shape, or form?. Seriously, he's beginning to piss me off. Not that it's overly hard to do mind you but still, can he get anymore annoying without someone removing his head for him? It wouldn't be THAT great of a loss lol Good chapter, Update soon please.
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Reviewed By: Tokyogurl1 On: September 03, 2005 01:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! That is sooooo cool. And now that Keiko is there maybe Yusuke will be more nice and not that rough like Inuyasha and all. And does Yukina know that Hiei is her bro yet. In this one?? Oh well. Hmmm well I really like this story. I really do. I can't wait for the next chappie. I hope you update really soon and all. well Laters Tokyogurl1
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Reviewed By: Gothmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, update again. So far you've managed to keep all the characters in character. I love the way you managed to put so many characters in the story. Really good work. Update, ^_^
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Reviewed By: CM On: August 31, 2005 13:56 CDT
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YAYNESS! Updates rule! Woot. I think this story is so cute...thought I am having a hard time picking which guy I think Kagome should end up with...yeah. Too many choices XP
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 09:19 CDT
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Ahhh Kurama is always the intuitive one. Inu's always been an insensitive jerk, this was a good chapter, please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Mai-sama On: August 18, 2005 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiya! i really like your story! I love it. I love all the anime/video games that you put in this story. Also i like how you put all of this togeher and all. well I hope you update really soon. Later Mai-sama
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 20:58 CDT
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I'm honestly not sure why there aren't more reviews for your story. Part of it I think may be because the emails when a story gets updated are no longer going out for this site. Everyone Ive spoken to is having the same issue. I only knew about it because of the email from FF.net. My own reviews have been suffering horribly. Anyhow onto the review. I'm not surprised that Kagome is barren, what was said is very true. She's likely to have suffered irrepairable damage from what Naraku did to her as a child. That might be why she views alot of her subordanates as "children" it seems in addition to the heirarchy that has been established. Seems like she told Yusuke exactly what she thinks of him not that I blame her. He is being a jerk. I'm curious as to what Hiei and Kurama were thinking during her little speech. Good chapter, I look forward to the next one. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please please please please PLEASE update soon i can berly wate for the next one
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Title: Maria a.k.a Shadow Queen
Reviewed By: kaibafan1 (not logged in) On: June 23, 2005 09:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is great so far, but Kagome should have took her father out for what he had done. Judging her power she should be way stronger then him and able to defend her brothers at the same time.
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 01:54 CDT
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Very good chapter, I wonder how many of the others ended up watching the two of them given the penchant for voyerism that runs rampant through the castle lol Update soon please.
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2005 08:31 CDT
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Oh her Daddy is just asking for a brutal demise lol Good chapter, update soon please.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 13:47 CDT
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i cant wate for the next one please up date asap oya i still love this fic
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 08:51 CDT
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Very good chapter, wonder which of the guys is going to go to her first now that they have heard what Miroku told them. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Update soon please
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Reviewed By: tokyo mew mew On: May 11, 2005 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I vote for Kagome/Hiei!!!! please update.^_~
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Title: Love it! *^_^*
Reviewed By: Fire soul On: May 11, 2005 15:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's so cool! nice story! *^_^* I love it!!! I vote for Hiei/Kagome! *^_^* they make a great mach in this story. don't you think? please update soon! *^_^*
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 19:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read all 10 chapters in a role and i loved them cant what for the next one to come out
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