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"Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: jf_girl  On: January 28, 2005 23:08 CST
Comment/Review:
i dont like it is a little depressing but you could of given a fuller explination for their death for first time readers?
 Reviewed By: JB  On: January 12, 2005 13:56 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
*weeps* nuuu, so sad! *cries* It's like Romeo and Juliet, but more tragic, cuz these guys suffered over the years and waah! *coughs and sobers* Okay, nice writing. Short but nice. Normally don't like suicides, but in this case, it's the right kind of tragic I suppose. Poor Kagura having to witness that. ^^;

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