"The Meeting" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: pyro12 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 16:58 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review: I love it, but please, please, use proper grammar!! ARGH!!
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Reviewed By: Soldier Heero On: December 06, 2002 20:33 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Excellent you have accented the personalitys of the characters ver y nicely But I have to sugget you continue with this beautyful pieace of art. but I have a suggestion increase the imagination of the attakcs for the princes like make them simulair to the attacks of the Scouts.
Domo Agrato (SP?) if you do not understand what I tryed to type I said thank you. |
Reviewed By: Unknown On: October 14, 2002 13:47 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: The story is okay, but i just thought I'd mention that Amara(Sailor Uranus) and Michelle(Sailor Neptune) are a couple. If you don't believe me, just look on the internet for pictures of Senshi pairs. Anyway, i do look forward to the rest of the story. |
Reviewed By: God of Death's Lover On: January 18, 2002 18:34 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Write more chapters! I love this story. By the way, there is only one word for the super sexy God of Death Duo: MINE
So everyone else, keep your hands and other body parts away from MY MAN. |
Reviewed By: Greymalkin On: January 13, 2002 21:07 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: You have something really good going, keep writing, it really good. |
Reviewed By: SS On: January 13, 2002 19:48 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Really cool! Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Falconess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2002 11:48 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I luvvv it! and i have just a few thngs to say- Write More!, wut happens next, and I Luvv it |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2002 22:11 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! danm you you must wright more you MUST |
Reviewed By: Amy On: January 12, 2002 08:31 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I'm back. Did ya miss me? I have the same three questions: What happens next? What happens next? and WHAT HAPPENES NEXT???!! Please keep writing!
Other wise, your paying my rubber-room rent.
P.S: Quatre is soooo fine and he's MINE! |
Reviewed By: Ami Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2002 15:13 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Love the story, but dear, please work on the grammar!!
Can't wait to read the next part!
P.S. Heero's mine. |
Reviewed By: Amy On: January 02, 2002 20:15 CST Comment/Review: I'm back. Did ya miss me? I have the same three questions: What happens next? What happens next? and WHAT HAPPENES NEXT???!! Please keep writing!
P.S: Quatre is soooo fine and he's MINE! |
Reviewed By: Amy On: January 01, 2002 19:00 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I'm back. Did ya miss me? I have the same three questions: What happens next? What happens next? and WHAT HAPPENES NEXT???!! Please keep writing!
P.S: Quatre is soooo fine and he's MINE! |
Reviewed By: Amy On: December 27, 2001 16:06 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I'm back. Did miss me? I have three questions: What happens next? What happens next? and WHAT HAPPENES NEXT???!! Please keep writing!
P.S: Quatre is soooo fine and he's MINE! |
Reviewed By: Celesun On: December 20, 2001 11:50 CST Comment/Review: ohhh, I like the suspence.
keep on writting I think it's great so far.^^ |
Reviewed By: Greymalkin On: December 19, 2001 23:21 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Not bad. Not bad at all. Keep writing i look forward to reading more. |
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