Title: Ooooh Reviewed By: Shinoshinoshino On: April 01, 2006 01:26 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This story ====> Great. Keep it up, but one thing. Shino has eyes, doi, but he just covers them up all the time.
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