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Reviewed By: BlueMo0n [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 09:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautifully written. It's seems very passionate and the little quirks and twists throughout add gorgeous detail to your style of writing. Rating 10/10 for your fabulous story. :D
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Reviewed By: kagomestanton *not logged in* On: February 11, 2005 22:30 CST
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hahahahahahhahahahahahaah! that was soooooo goooooddd! o my gosh! i think im dying! could you please please please update asap because this shouldn't be a one-shot! you should keep on going! c'mon! i'll love you forever!
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Reviewed By: mangomoo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 16:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was SO bleepin CUTE! InuYasha and Kagome... I just.. can't even reply! That was so good you HAVE to add to this story or follow up on what happened OR SOMETHING! Great job girl!
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Reviewed By: Washuu Ogmai On: February 10, 2005 09:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a fun fic--my only complaint is its brevity! I'm hoping you expand this adorable vignette into a larger fic! Romance, ramen, Miroku being his usual self, Shippou as always the larger voice of reason, wise and tolerant kistune youth that he is...and Inu *dropping* Kagome,then running off, instead of scooping her up? LOL, he'd acted like a startled feline, rather than inu. ;) The emotions swung; this was a well-articulated,well-emoted piece, and you'd pulled my heartstrings at that frozen moment of 'will he or won't he reject her from his own fear?' as her tears fell. Niiice job,arigatou. :)
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Reviewed By: devildice708 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 11:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very well-written one-shot. I like it a lot! It focuses on two people i always wondered about. Can't wait to see what you think of next. Peace!
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Title: *content sigh*
Reviewed By: Lady_Yukiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 16:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww, I love this story. What a great way to tell about the first kisses of everyone's favorite coupels. You know I was having a horrible up until now, but after reading the latest update of Metamorphosis, I'm feeling quite cheerful. Thanks for the great story and for bringing some sunshine to my day.
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Reviewed By: XueLi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 21:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a very natural flow to your writing. I really enjoyed this story and you really kept everyone in character. Good job!
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Reviewed By: A peeersoooon On: February 07, 2005 09:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... nice and sweet, and all in character. This is a GREAT piece of work!! Congratulations! I wish I could write that well...
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: January 15, 2005 22:11 CST
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That's so cute - leave it to the girls to get the 'party' started!!
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: January 15, 2005 17:53 CST
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Aww, how sweet...and fun! Kagome setting Sango and Miroku up for their first kiss and getting caught in her own trap with InuYasha...priceless. InuYasha running off when discovered was not surprising, but Kagome's comment, "...I can't feel my legs..." just floored me! LMAO ---I loved it.
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Reviewed By: chichiwvu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 17:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a very cute fic:) I really enjoyed it. I love fluff invovling both couples and this was a nice enjoyable story. :) :) :)
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Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 15:02 CST
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Wonderful! I did enjoy that, so well in character too; gives us Inuyasha fans some hope for a little please-me from our favourite group of couples!
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Title: WOOO!!!
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 12:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I had fun helping you out with this, even though Sue yelled at us multiple times. Hehehe, such good atmosphere... hehehe yesh! It came out beautifully and the kiss was perfect. I love Sango's reaction the best--lol, it's about time is SO right! Great writing and update Legend =P and no, Sue did NOT put me up to that... I wanna read ^_~
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Title: Enyoyed your story.
Reviewed By: LadyBarrista [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 11:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have enjoyed every minute reading this story. I even cried when Kagome felt that moment of hurt when she though Inuyasha was rejecting her. Thank you for sharing Sue's birthday gift with the rest of her fans.
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Reviewed By: missbritt [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 06:06 CST
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it was really good i hope sue had a simi good b-day well it was really good keep it up ok thanks for the story ;)
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