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Title: **random pondering **
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2010 11:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Having recently reread this fic, it occurs to me that Ryo as a twin has lots of differences/nuances psyche-wise than Kich. The one that really tickled my fancy was how much he's similar to his father in how he didn't really have a great knowledge of his Youkai Voice to start and kinda figured it as his conscious ramblings/remonstrations, etc... 'Cept, in his case, over being possibly hereditary--well, maybe more a habit than a family trait--this habit of not internalizing may have been from his similarity to InuYasha to act first, think later... Also, in the case of his Youkai Voice not making itself more plainly know earlier in life, well, it was an irregular situation, meating your soulmate so early in life you don't even get it because you're too young to be into girls, yet. It could've been enlightening to have that foreknowledge as well as extremely uncomfortable/touchy to a boy to deal with all that "mushy/cootie" stuff back then. They were like 2 boys growing up, Ryo and Nez, and it worked for them. The willingness to protect, as instilled by his father and also a basically instinctual thing with dog youkai/hanyous, kept them close throughout the years but the reality of their bond took years to come to light and many misunderstandings/looked-over occurences/assumptions lead to a big ole bucket of angst that tore at me everytime I read it. When Pyo's Youkai Voice chewed him out about putting Nez on theshelf, only to pull her out and play with her when he felt the need, I was like "Oh...HARSH!" True for themost part, but harsh all the same. I get a better, brighter, deeper understanding of your characters and their inner workings with every reread and willNEVER tire of the series! You are a queen among fanfiction and I'm so pleasedI ran across you and your wonderful works! As always, I look forward to your next installment! Thanks for sharing your gifts with all of us!
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2009 03:10 CST
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aw! i just re-read this story for the heck of it and loved it all over again : )
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Reviewed By: eriste [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 11:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I'll admit it. I'm rereading this one, yet again. For some reason, I love Ryo and Nez. The twins have always amused me, but reading about him and Nez struggling through this...unintentional...mating, it just, I dunno, but I love this one. I'm hoping you'll update 8 or 9 soon though. What can I say, Sueric? I'm obsessed with your stories.
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Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 01:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is by far my absolute favorite of all the purities. Although purity 9 is climbing right on up there with this and purity 4! Just thought I'd go an re-read a few of your amazing works while I waited for you newest burst of amazingness! :D
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Title: F**k those flamers
Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2008 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know the a/n for this chapter is super old but I just wanted to say that it's bull shit about those flamers. They srsly need to get a life! What does making you feel like shit do? Your entitled to like what you like and write what you write it's a free country! And you are an extremely talented writer! If you want I should hunt them down for you I'd be honored. Srsly think about it! Your true fan -Ami
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2008 03:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
re-reading all the stories... in order...
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2008 16:52 CST
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agh ur a/n's are killing me. i really can't believe that some people are so selfish and arrogant that they would flame you about ridiculous things like that. seriously how hard is it for u to stop reading a story if you don't like it? it's not like ur work is offensive. i'm so sorry to hear about this and i know i'm reading stuff from a while back but i'm hoping that people have gained some sense by now and become more respectful. you don't deserve their misplaced, asinine comments.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2008 15:31 CST
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i've read three chapters and i am addicted lol. god you're an incredible writer! it's so detailed i feel like i'm watching it all play out!
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Title: Yay :)
Reviewed By: DoggieEarsYayy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 01:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nipple Stud? 30 dollars. Ring Pops? 4 dollars. Credit card bill? 2,000 dollars. An Elvis impersonator marrying you and your love? Priceless. All in all, I loved it, though there were times I wanted to scream at both the characters because of their bakaness.I loved the story, though :). Especially that dumb cat.
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Title: oops! 8th line should start with:
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 18:05 CDT
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win that bet/Coward tease that she wouldn't deliver that letter then, the rest of the line, starting with (oh my GAWSH... I hate typos! that's all tee hee!
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Title: Oh, HELL no! I didn't comment!??!! Oh, what a travesty of justice! Just pinch me!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 14:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the funniest things i've ever read! Ryo and Kich are off the meat rack! and, poor Nez (OMIGAWSH, that NAME--LOL!)...wow! this story, i can REALLY see happening! actually, i HAVE seen a very similar thing happen to someone i know, in real life (mysticism and demonlore, aside)...but, not just humor, it was deep. it's amazing what self-imposed, unrequited friendship will do to a person's emotions. poor nez, already so introverted and insecure and Ryo's dense, horny tail BRAGS about his escapades, like Nez, like she's one of the guys (which, she pretty much is, in his eyes)...and since that's all she thinks she'll ever be (and seems so scared that he'd never be satisfied with JUST her), she just busts a "Kagome" on him. the wedding was HILARIOUS (Elvis and Ring Pops...Ai Dios Mio!)...the doll scene, at the graveyard, with the pastor...WOWness! i was a little mshed out, there (ESPECIALLY when Ryo cried for her). and that flashback of when she almost froze to win that deliver that letter (oh my GAWSH! even though i KNEW she made it [DUH, me! it's a FLASHBACK!], my heart was in my toes as she took every treachorous step) and the letter, itself was NOTHING like i expected...so sweet! i'm glad she read it! the nipple stud was PRICELESS! the whole story was. i lourve your fics, sue!
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Title: Bravado
Reviewed By: Fanfactor [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bravo!! I loved this one the best. It seemed to flow more throughout this one then in Purity 2, and 4. Purity 1 was great in the beginning and i luved it. Anyway I love Ryo and Nezumi the best. THe whole naviete from them about "certain questions" really made me laugh
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Title: Beautiful.
Reviewed By: Leeloo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 10:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Reading your Purity continuations is the main reason I go to work. I think my boss is catching on to the fact that I don't do any work, though- I just read. I'm off to Purity 4.
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Title: Finally
Reviewed By: IchiNaru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 21:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU ARE AMAZING! I read this a long time ago and well when I changed computers lost it but I finally searched in description Ryomaru and it worked! I am amazed by how entertaining this is. I have been trying to remember your member name forever and I just couldent I remembered that it started with and "S" but that was it. Well back to my review; this is sooo good It is the best fanfic I have read now that I have your name I'm gonna read all your other stories and hopefully enjoy them just as much if not more. I love how you made the drama in this soo intense I am reading it again just because it is the best I have seen. I would love to have a chat with you some time maby email or whatnot but I admire you that this is just to relax If you get really serious you could start your own Series just as popular as Inuyasha. I hope that you will not forget about media miner and still write us amazing fanfics when you can. You were very inventive with the transfering blood tradition and such. Well im off to read again maby try and write my own fanfic. Well Ja Ne!, IchiNaru P.S. I'm sorry if I sound a little weird or over admiring I just got out of surgery and finding this got me really excited I am not really thinking well today so excuse me for any annoyances I may have caused. (to contact me email me it would make my day to talk to you) dylanflan@pacbell.net
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Reviewed By: rhonda On: December 14, 2006 18:08 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have read all of your stories and i love them. i am jealous of you because i don't have your talent. i think that is why so people flame you because they maybe jealous of your talent. as jealous as i maybe i however am entertained by your writing. i hope that you don't get discourage by the flames and continue to write for the untalented like me to be entertained.
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 13:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm an incurable romantic and daydreamer... I'm glad i've got a focus for these activities now! Though i have a habit of reading the reviews at the ends of the chapters (i've read from purity 1) and some of the flames are upsetting. Why do some people have to make everything so morbid? Anyway, I lve the stories, keep it up. btw, Miroku and Sango were some of my favourite charachters, and it's upsetting to think that, beyond Sierra's family history, they'll never appear again. Or have i not read far enough? (wishful thinking, i know...)
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2006 23:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was just wonderful! i know im really late in reading these stories but i never had time. im glad i finally do cuz these stories are great!! now one to #4 : )
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Reviewed By: Sayo124 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 05:00 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! I finally finished this! And as well as Purity 3, I've read Metamorphasis, but you won't allow reviewers for that particular story, so I'll tell you that Metamorphasis was an amazing story that proved how important trust is. Kagome trusted Sango; Sango trusted Kagome... Sango REALLY trusted Kagome, and Kagome was the best, supportive person to have had enough love for Sango to carry her child. She also had to trust Inuyasha and herself. Totally changing the subject, I have to say that Purity 3 was an enjoyable read and I adore it to pieces--as well as all your other works--and I look forward to reading more!
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Reviewed By: InuBaby369246 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2006 13:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story and all the ones before it are amazingly writen. The sheer amount of talent in them is astounding, and all the time you must have spent on them. I can't tell you just how much I like it. Though I can tell you that there were moments when, had I not been in public, I would have laughed my head off, and others when I would have probably cried. I do have a question, though. You mentioned once that Toga and Aiko had nieces. How does that work? Weren't they Sesshy's and Kagura's only children?
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Reviewed By: Shikon no Jedi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 20:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I must say this is my favorite of all the Puritys, its just hilarious. Also, Grammar Beta rules! (Love your comment at the end of Purity 3 Chapter 32)! Just out of curiosity, will you ever write a Kagome and Sesshoumaru story or does she belong solely with Inuyasha?
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Reviewed By: TheFabledCat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2005 09:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For starters I have to say I love your style of writing, it's great! I usually don't read continuations. Somehow after the main characters get to their 'happy ending' I don't bother, but your story pulled me in and I just HAD to read all of them. You have a way with words and I have to say that I wish I could write as well as you do. Well I'm going to get all generic now and ask you to 'keep up the good work!'
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Reviewed By: Hitomi Shousan On: August 25, 2005 08:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A beautiful story.. Im truly(without exaggerating)speachless.. The story of Nezumi and Ryo makes your dreams come true ^^"
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Title: Purity 3
Reviewed By: kappei_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 23:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ryomaru and Nez, a match made in heaven! Truly! They really do complete each other! Ryo is so much like his old man I just want to cry; it is so wonderful to read about him. You understand InuYasha so well, and I believe your love for the characters makes your writing as wonderful as it is! Nez's character is so very easy to identify with, she's a smart girl who isn't easily fooled and who takes time to learn to trust. We all are afraid to lend our hearts out, we all have apprehension and worry we will be rejected. She embodies a great chunk of the people in the world in my opinion. Ryomaru is also very easy to understand, a typical guy looking for love in all the wrong places, not realizing what he really wanted until he stumbled upon it. Ryo is very clearly his father's son and the fact you can write him so clearly it's truly amazing. Beautiful, amazing, funny and breathtaking are all the words that come to mind about this fic. You make love stories into love stories. This fic is not your typical love story, it shows that while you can love someone all your life, you can never really understand and appreciate that love until it's almost too late. So real, all your stories are so life like. I applaud you on your genius and hope you never stop writing, ever. :)
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Reviewed By: jessica G. On: July 17, 2005 16:20 CDT
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oh my god this is like the greatest story ever with the drama and action and more. i juat cannot believe how great of a auther you are
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers (it wount let me on!!!!) On: July 11, 2005 11:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol i love this one now i must start p4.....
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 06:10 CDT
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OMG Ring POPss !!!!!! i'm still laughing one the floor!!!! I just know eather you or someone around you at the time you were writing that had to have had one. It's just far to off trail to just think up regardless. Well thats the 3rd one down and a good one @ that only one to go. But then again there is always sess daughter.. or at list i think i remember him having a daughter.. Could be fun to make her gay. hint hint /me thinks of sess's reaction to that one.
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Reviewed By: LuvinInuyasha On: July 05, 2005 18:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!THAT STORY WAS GREAT!!!I LOVED IT!!YOU SHOULD WRITE MORE!
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Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...seeing the number of reviews you've received, I feel kinda guilty for not reviewing each chapter, instead of reading the whole story and then reviewing ^^; Anyways, this is amazing. I don't think I reviewed Purity 2 though I did read it. In short, all your fics thus far have been beyond amazing. I've never seen anyone so seamlessly weave together and continue different timelimes like this, and maintain a consistency bewtween, well...everything! Not to mention how you can juggle so many characters at one time. Its simply staggering. to all you flamers and self-imagined "critics" out there: go f*** yourselves. This here is a great piece of work by a great author, but if you got a negative opionion, keep it to yourself. Freedom of speech can only go so far guys. Don't abuse it. Anyway, Sueric - keep up the awesome work! God bless you and your family! Peace to you all! d('')b
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Title: Great job
Reviewed By: Inuyashasclone [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 12:22 CDT
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I love this fanfic it's just as good as the other purity fics I;ve read by you. So, about ryomaru, I hope he tells nez how he feels soon but I see her saying it first. Anyway great job loving this story.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Eliwoodsluv [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so sorry that I have not written but I would get too caught up in the story but... wow Your writing is soooo good. I love it!^-^ Please continue. I know that Purity 3 is finished but keep working on Purity 4 for all of your fans, including the Peenie Queen, but remember to write for yourself just for the fun of it. And have fun abusing your betas^-^ GO SUE!
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