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Reviewed By: Jason C On: March 31, 2005 05:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow yet another chapter from the great sueric. And you also started Purity 4 as well. This is by far the best inuyasha fan fiction serries I have ever seen/read. I hope you never lose your writing style or anything related to writing. and anyone who lamess the great Seuric I will hunt down and make them eat their words. DO YOU HEAR ME FLAMERS DO YA!!!!
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Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 03:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey sue, I see that some want a "lemon" and just for the record I don't care one way or the other whether you put a lemon in this story or not. So if anyone bugs you about writing lemons, don't listen cause you are in charge so write the story the way you feel empowered to!!! I absolutely love the way you write the passionate scenes when they are kissing or just talking. This chapter was so well written I couldn't help but sit there and just smile and sigh. I reread it three times. Absolutely beautiful. Thank you thank you thank you for an excellant story. PS> I am beginning to hate weekends ( no sue chapts) and love Mondays (sue posts a chapt! Yay!) . Uhhh did I just say I hated the weekends?!!! Egaddd I must be nuts!!! My birthday is April 1st so yeh guess I am nuts. (I'll just be an older old fart on Friday) Love ya sue and thanks again, great story. J
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Reviewed By: Rawbenblskdjf;sldf On: March 31, 2005 00:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
daaaaaamn. poor ryo. ouch. and i'm so bummed! aff.net is suckin! i've been waiting for you to update there, and it doesn't come up. so now i'll just look here at mm.org. oh, also, i like more lemons than you usually do in your fics. not that you should change just for me... but... it's a thought!
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Title: Great Chapter
Reviewed By: Jaxomruth [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 00:06 CST
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Another wonderful chapter. I am glad that Nez forgave Ryo. He may have been an idiot but he didn't mean any harm. He has been raised with this sort of things all the time. It isn't unusual for him. He just doesn't use his head, like father, like son. I am of two minds about the end of the chapter. I know that him backing off is better for their long term relationship but I want another lemon.
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Title: For chapter 19
Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 23:38 CST
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NOO!!! NEZ JUST KISS HIM!!!!! AND KEEP KISSING HIM !!!! and then amble into the bedrooom. and let us back in the morning after. Ha! just kidding. Poor Ryo can't seem to get away from that reputation of his. *sigh* communication problems. Another wonderful chapter!
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 23:37 CST
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**sigh** I want to smack Ryo... Nez wasn't fighting it - she was .. well.. He needs to learn to use his damn nose... Nez, well, she needs to ... oh heck, I don't know... I wouldn't have told him to get off!!
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Title: For Chapter 18
Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 23:30 CST
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*whistles* Ryo is gonna have his ass kicked for that. Atleast Toga had the sense not to start fighting with Sierra in the room and to stop when she walked in. What is WRONG with Ryo?! Is he emotionaly uneducated? Does he know NOTHING! ARGH! Poor Nezumi has to deal with him. She really needs to teach him how to have a relationship and NOT screw it up, or atleast have it not only based on certain animalistic instincts. Ryo = Moron! Don't get me wrong i love the mutt he just makes me wanna strangle him. Love this chapter!
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Title: O.o Nez wants a Kotodama for Ryo?? LOL
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 21:14 CST
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Whew did things get heavy real fast! God! Nez won't give in and "love" Ryo...because she loves him. She can't risk losing her best friend in a romantic relationship with him when she believes it will be doomed like all the rest of his love-interests. I can't help but sympathize with Nez. Her head and heart aren't at odds with each other, like a lot of other people who fall in love. They both agree that they "love" Ryo but the past has proven that he has no staying power. I don't know how Ryo is ever going to prove to Nez that it's forever. The poor guy is chasing his tail around in circles (pun intended) running into evidence of his idiocy with each circuit. -- *bites lip and squints, shaking head* I just don't see a light at the end of the tunnel here...
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Title: *sigh*
Reviewed By: OROsan7706 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 18:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Ryo...poor Nezumi. Man I hope this works out for them soon...then again maybe not cause you're such a great writer.
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Title: What a Chapter!!
Reviewed By: Washuu Ogami On: March 30, 2005 18:38 CST
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::pounding heart:: Nez has *no* clue how much devotion Ryo's ground under heel with when he backpedals at the last moment, hunh? And her warranted, slowly crumbling defenses as much a barrier--argh! LOL, concerned more w/his mom's "purifying his ass"?! Oh, have you a way w/scenes!! LOL, a kotodama for Ryo?? LOLROTF!! You've such the knack for drawing a reader in, when we're softening, hit us upside the head w/hilarity, then go for the angst jugular--!! Thanks for another stellar slice of these wonderful, wonderful characters'...dare I say 'people'-for that's where you've elevated them?--lives. Looking fwd to more.
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Reviewed By: thegoddess On: March 30, 2005 17:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the story on whole. I had started to read the first one on affnet but then all of a sudden it disappeared. LOL, anyway I love the story and I cannot wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 17:22 CST
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i can c it now...nez: "sit!" and ryo hits the ground...hehe i'm kidding...ne wayz i see at the ending that nez is puttin more thought into the relationship which is good! :)
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Title: WOW!!!!
Reviewed By: akdreamer On: March 30, 2005 16:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter as always!! Sorry I havent't been reviewing as often, thought I'd give you a break from me...LOL!! Any ways keep it up your writting is as awesome as ever and now I see a new Purity!!!! I'm sooooo excited!!!! See ya soon!!!
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Title: How cute!!!
Reviewed By: inuyashasluverforever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 16:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, how CUTE!!!!!! I think I'm going to cry. Wow, Nezumi is almost as lucky as Kagome is. . . . . And Sierra, too. *sigh* I wish I could find a guy like one of them. . . . . Oh well, everybody doesn't always get what they want. Anyway, great chapter and PERTY PLEASE (sorry I am from Texas ) update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: RadiosNmyHead [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 15:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooh... Intense chapter at the end there. In a good way. An oh so good way. Huzzah! Here's a random question... does Ryo dance? For some reason I could just see him busting out on the dance floor. Anyway, great chapter, and keep torturing your characters and your friends.
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