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Reviewed By: Deirdre On: March 15, 2005 18:23 CST
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Are you stalking me? Honestly! There are so many elements in this story that remind me of myself or people in my life. This is an addicting read and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Suze (really, really lazy) On: March 15, 2005 18:17 CST
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"For kami's sake, will you stop *playing* with it!!" - I think I have my new sig line. ;) Super ouch. I can't believe Ryo went through with it (and the nip of all places!). Then again...I suppose he's not really one to turn down a challenge, huh? Oh man...my side hurts from laughing. Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: JaskoLefey [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 18:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love the whole purity series. I really love forever. I like the whole mix match that nez and Ryo are. It gives them a sense of realism that most author have lost. Thank you for writing This series
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Title: *ba-link*
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess not signed in On: March 15, 2005 18:12 CST
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You tease! Ryo not stay with her anymore?! Grrr... lol I love this story. So great!
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Title: cherylv@seward.net
Reviewed By: akdreamer On: March 15, 2005 16:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm LMAO!!! Body piercing,Eeeewwwwww!! LOL!! An Awesome chapter as always...Can't wait for tomorrow...Will he do it? Gotta know, LOL!! Well I'll see ya next time!!!
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: March 15, 2005 09:01 CST
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Ryo should get the Vampire piercings - he'd look hot! (then again, he already does) It's not like the piercing would stay if he takes out the stud or ring anyway... he heals to well.
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Reviewed By: notzathros aka laptawenzell On: March 15, 2005 08:20 CST
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"the way his fuzzy little ears wilted" Awww! Too cute. Makes me want to be in the apartment to see it. I am absolutely loving this story!! Please feel better soon. I wish there was a way I could help you not feel so bad when you get thoughtless reviews. For every person who whines, there are a thousand others who are quietly enjoying your work (plus those of us who are vocally enjoying your work). Courage, brave author. Eagerly looking forward to the next chapter.
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Title: oh, and secondly
Reviewed By: Barachan22 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 05:41 CST
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Gosh don't you hate it when you forget everything you wanna rave about before you click submit. I also muct concur...crawling men very sexy...crawling inuhanyos....uber sexy...off the charts...I sooooo need a real boyfriend ;) Oh, on question I did have...is it the lawful or the righteous (??) fang that came from yasha?
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Title: The Hidden Inu in Ryo
Reviewed By: Barachan22 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 05:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...I know I've told you before, but I loooove your stories. Big Fatty FLAME to the jerk who thinks sleeping with your best firend when you've had one too many is "glorified rape". Loser. What I do find very intriguing is how much Ryo is like Yasha. A lot of fics like to PWP Kags & Inu into sex right away without ever looking at the reality of transitioning from friends to lovers when there is such a huge sense of doubt and infieroity felt by each partner. Way to tackle the tuff hurdles in real relationships! I can't wait to see jsut WHAT Ryo gets pierced. :)
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Reviewed By: Suze (still too lazy to sign in) On: March 15, 2005 02:59 CST
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0.o My little brain just overloaded thinking of the possible places that Ryo could pierce. OUCH! Nez is such an awesome match for Ryo. She's not one of those vapid b*tches that he had been fooling around with. I love that she butts heads with him and challenges him, and gets frustrated with him, but still cares very much about him. Just what he needs. :) I'm sorry that the idiots have been out in full force. Reading your stories is the highlight of my day. Thank you so much for sharing with us!!!
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Title: thank you sue
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 02:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for a uniquely funny and very creative story. I just love how these two won't admit their feelings for one another. Really Sue, it is such an enjoyable story and it seems like although they tend to rub each other like sandpaper, underneath it all they both truly care for one another. What does the name Ryo mean again? Also Sue your answer to me about Metamorphosis really touched me deeply and I am sorry that you were hurt. For years I have stopped doing things I enjoy due to critical hurtful remarks made by people. Sometimes its like losing part of your soul. Sue, your determination to perservere has made me rethink about what I have given up and loss due people's remarks. Maybe I will try again to find the pieces of my soul that I have loss. Thank you Sue cause you made me rethink things. You truly are a good influence. Also, I know this is long and I will keep my reviews short next time but just needed to say what I did. thanks again . J
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Title: Keep on a truckin'!
Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 02:12 CST
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Just so you know, I've been following you for quite some time. And I DO have to say that I really enjoyed "Metamorphosis." I could definitely tell that you had a really difficult time with it, not in as it was a bad story, but with the general concept and how people reviewed it. I thought it was brilliant, and those people who are too narrow-minded to understand it should go find a children's book to read, preferably "See Spot Run". Anywho, nuff of my ranting. I'm glad to see you slogging through your stories no matter how stupid some people get. You ARE my top author and I eagerly absorb ALL of your stories. Thanks for making my reading worthwhile. And oh, yeah, this story has an AWESOME plot line and twists... You have GREAT character concept and a person can tell that you put ACTUAL thought into what you write. Can't wait to read the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: angelica incarnate (thought I signed in...) On: March 15, 2005 02:05 CST
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Chapter 6: I found Ryo's watching over Nez as she slept to be a beautiful and poignant moment. It's alwasy good to let out the inner softie! Chapter 7: LOL, such a womanizer, ne? "`Stupid bitch,' he thought with a snort. `Just what the fuck was she doing?' Somehow, I don't think Nez has too much to worry about--too bad she can't hear some of his thoughts, ne? And body piercing huh?? OOOOOOH MY. Sorry today was such a bad day Sue. To quote you words do have power. And the power you have over so many always astounds me. The fact that this power comes straight from the depths of you heart is even more amazing to me than the number of people who are there for you.
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Title: Washuu Ogami
Reviewed By: Washuu Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 22:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ryo isn't getting a break, is he? ;) Misunderstood all around...even by a reader?! Grrrrr...Nezumi's crazy about Ryo, she was indeed willing! Angry, a very,very strong character rightfully (IMHO) incensed at his lack of recall of their momentous joining--!! Hnh, I know all too well what that "r" word is, what it reads like, and their joining was the farthest from it!!!!! LOLROTF, he blurting out in an echoing stairwell he can't *smell* if she's wearing undergarments?! That is Classic, a literary Kodak Moment, Sue!!!! Fine form as usual. :) Thanks for Chapters 1-7, and leaving strawberry pocky boxes offering on your doorstep!
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Reviewed By: Kitcat99 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 22:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay I admit it I've been reading this whole time and have not reviewed once...Heh heh...^^;; Not that I wasn't going to I just haven't had much time. Anyway, like the rest of this series for lack of a better discription I can't wait for the next chapter. I completely agree with your response to that review, calling the beginning a "rape" is just wrong and has no basis to it at all. I would suggest that the person look up the meaning of a word before using it. If you don't know what it means don't use it! I would also just like to say that Nezumi is one of my favorite characters so far. Well her, Gin, and Toga in Purity 2...so much for fluffy-sama getting his way. I can see Gin giving Inuyasha a really hard time in the future. Bawahahahaha! If you keep writing I will keep reading. ^_^
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