| "Golden Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: USuki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 01:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
I posted this on the elysianfield.net archive, that might be where you saw it. That's the second comment I've gotten on my ending... how could it be better? Honestly, I thought the story was dragging at the end. Comments, criticisms?
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Reviewed By: court6969 On: May 27, 2005 13:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
your fanfic. was really cool... i have to admit you really amazed me with those unique and not to mention funny come backs and conversations the characters keep projecting=).... overall i really must say "that was HELL funny!!!"... but still u cant end it like that *pouts* its unfair!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and oh yeah ive read this exact story before... but in a diff. site... im sure of it... i forgot were but if remember or stumble into it i'll tell u... okie=) ja ne *falls in a deep slumber* oyasumi nasai!!!!
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Reviewed By: lu On: April 12, 2005 17:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it would have been a 10 if the ending didn't suck so bad you ended it way to fast
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Reviewed By: inuyashagirl5 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good! I'm so glad I read it! I hope you do update soon!
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Reviewed By: 66666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666 On: March 26, 2005 17:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
UPDATE >.
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Reviewed By: FrAnKiEcrow On: March 19, 2005 20:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
won't you write a chapter of them cutting the whole dramatic crap and have them see each other every other day
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 10:03 CST
Comment/Review:
Aww..comeon..you cant end it like that *pouts*.. please write one more chapter...or soemthing...pweeeessseeeeee
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Reviewed By: Jamie1317kast [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 20:54 CST
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i love your work. please write more. it's in depth, enjoyable, and yet at the same time, so real and true to the characters and to life itself. all of your works reflect this amazing talent in writing, please, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: vicious_v [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 20:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
,mm
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Reviewed By: vicious_v [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 20:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow...I want more *wimper*
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2005 02:48 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm loving it kido
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Reviewed By: ShigureFan On: February 11, 2005 21:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, you must update this beautiful fic. I must know the ending and what would become of these two desperate lovers who are in need of each other. Please!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Maribel On: February 09, 2005 21:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg!! I really like the fic but some of the words seem cut off ;-; btw the last chapter was so tempting! Can't wait to see where they take the rest of their foreplay ^_-
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Reviewed By: freakieaz [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 21:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww i love this story! please update soon i hate cliffhangers!!
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Reviewed By: Tigerbaby [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2005 17:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Just at the good part too. I hope you post again soon. It is a great story and if anyone flames it the have problems. Please post again soon!!!!!!
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