| "The Light That Never Goes Out" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: Eorl_The_Young On: March 13, 2005 22:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fanfic! Bakura and Ryou make such a cute couple. My favorite part was the last chapter, with Marik in it. ^_^ You did very good. *whacks self with a sword* What am I saying? You did super. Keep on writing!
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Reviewed By: Angelic_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 18:04 CST
Comment/Review:
this chapter rocks!^.^ cant wait for you to update!
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Title: GREAT
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 17:10 CST
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This was a really great chapter I swear this story gets better with every chapter i read. I love that yami bak is getting closer to bakura. And i can't wait till malik shows up. Please update soon. Buh-Bye ^__^
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Title: up date!
Reviewed By: mdhhgm On: February 17, 2005 11:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UP-DATE SOON! I'M ALWAYS CHECKING FOR IT!!! thankies!
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Title: great
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 22:09 CST
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That was another great chapter. I liked the dream. well memory I think. does that mean his yami had the same dream. awww thats so cute yb really did stay with bakura through the storm. Please update soon. Buh-Bye ^__^
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Title: Please continue
Reviewed By: Black Widow On: February 06, 2005 17:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfiction. It is one of the very best I have read. I love Bakura fanfictions. I really hope you finish this one and I cant wait till I read the rest. The light never comes out is a great fanfiction. I hope you finish it and keep on righting.
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Title: nice*
Reviewed By: foxgirl28 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 10:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"I love the story! Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 23:41 CST
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Those were really great chapters. Okay I was kinda confused with the whole stabbing thing but I sorta figured it out. Awww yami bakura does have a heart hes so non scary when hes caring for bakura. Can't wait to figure out why yamis so angry at yami yugi. Please update soon. Buh-Bye ^__^
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Reviewed By: Angelic_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 21:34 CST
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awWwWwW great sofar!!! UPDATE SOON!! ummm plz!
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Reviewed By: Maurelle On: January 27, 2005 15:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Maurelle loved. Can't wait for more. Yes, i'm reviewing on ch 5. lol. I'm reading the rest later. Too much stuff to do/read. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 10:58 CST
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That was a really good chapter. Yug and joey are a little oblivious. He got hurt because of some girls angry boyfriend and so he must have been scared that his yami would kill the jerk. Well can you blame him for wanting to. Please update soon cause I gotta know what happens next. Buh-Bye ^__^
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Reviewed By: paniwi (NLI) On: January 20, 2005 05:31 CST
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really cool story, I hope you'll continue soon. And don't worry, most people on mm.org use the japanese names, often they refer Bakura as Ryou and Yami Bakura just as Bakura for ease too.
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Reviewed By: Angelic_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 20:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY!! soo for its great! cant wait to see or um read the rest!!^^
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Title: Great Story!!!
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 02:02 CST
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This is a really great story and I like it alot. poor ryou hope he gets better. Can't wait to find out what happens next. Please update soon. Buh-bye ^__^
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: lunar star On: January 15, 2005 20:09 CST
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Nice work! Put up a new chapter. Poor Ryou. Oh well, at least Yami Bakura's looking after him.
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