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Title: hmmmness
Reviewed By: Matt the psycho nutjob On: January 16, 2005 21:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm.... it's good, definately. It needs more though, and im assumeing your still working on it. I like the style in which it's written, and it's got a solid beginning. Matt
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Reviewed By: Cassieandra On: January 16, 2005 21:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job guys! I definately would have never been able to come up with any of that... I'm sure it's not quite finsihed so it's coming along very well!
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Reviewed By: Kaila On: January 16, 2005 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was a pretty good story. I could never of made that up. good job It was sort of gory but it actually seemed like a real story. I think you did a really good. It was so bomb! I enjoyed most of it. ~Kaila
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