| "Kiss Away My Tears" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: karin On: March 15, 2005 23:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've never seen a akito/haru fic before . it was like so great Plez write another akito/haru fic Plez
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Reviewed By: Forgotten Sunrise [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 20:06 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a sweet fiction. I liked it eventhough it was a deathfic. I've never read an 'Akito X anyone' fic and this one was a food first. You kept me reading and for some reason, I could relate to Haru eventhough I've never been in that situation. Good work and keep it up~!!!
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Reviewed By: Immature Connoisseur [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2005 01:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was actually kind of sweet, though still angsty. It was written well, and flowed through each paragraph. The only thing is, the voice didn't change that much. Maybe more thought in word choice, to set a tone more promanitly. Other than that, GOOD JOB!!! I usually don't like Akito pairings, but this one was pretty good. I give you a round of applause!
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