| "Kagome's Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Title: wonderful
Reviewed By: naughtygrl On: January 04, 2006 21:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i wanted to cry! this story is so beautiful!
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: Mirena [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 18:41 CST
Comment/Review:
The pace of the story was nice, but does it end there? for althought is great it feels incomplete at the end but well he had 500 years to find out what he was looking right?
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Reviewed By: bayusandiw On: January 03, 2006 00:30 CST
Comment/Review:
Write On!!
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Title: OH!
Reviewed By: mermaid232 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 20:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow, you caught me off guard. The way you wrote this story was unbelievable. You almost made shed tears with the sadness and heartache but the reunion is want broke me down completely. I hope that these reviews were to your satisfaction. :)
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Reviewed By: anti-kikyou gerl On: December 25, 2005 13:30 CST
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i'm a little comfused. at the end of the story, was it guy is inuyasha from the past or inuyasha's recarnation ? i love your one-shot. it was so awesome!!!
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Title: I loved it!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 02:01 CDT
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This was adorable. I love that no matter what he found her...so cute. I love it.
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Title: ^_________________________________________^
Reviewed By: inuyasha_lover5209 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 21:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u need to continue this P.S.i love your stories
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 20:37 CDT
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OMG, that was soo sweet! I can;t believe you ended it like that, it could have go on and on and on and on!!!! It was good tho!
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Title: Good stuff
Reviewed By: Inuki-chan09 On: August 14, 2005 23:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a really good one-shot, but I found myself aggrevated by the fact that I didn't know how he got into her room, or how he knew about her? These questions keep me from fulling enjoying your one-shot. Don't get me wrong, I am NOT flaming, or telling you what to do, you are a good writer and I need not direct you, I am but a humble reader. (lol, sorry, I couldn't resist =) I love all of your stories!!! You are awesome!!
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Reviewed By: Kira562 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 12:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I love it I love it I love it I love it!!
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 01:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i loved it please please write more for it and tell me when you have i hope you will write more to the story. thanks
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Title: To The Point
Reviewed By: xenus [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 00:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I plan to keep this short. That was very good, and it was a relief from reading other fics, including working on my own. But I digress. This was well written, and I must commend you on the style you used. Great Job!!!
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Title: o_o ^_^
Reviewed By: memmme On: March 09, 2005 16:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked this story but i want to know what happend to kikyo ( I dont like her at all but still i want to know what happend to her)
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Reviewed By: HuHu_huggiez On: January 18, 2005 17:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i was touched i think you should continue it swear i felt a tear!!! i wish you would update i think this would make a good story!
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 02:44 CST
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Well it was nice, but how did InuYasha get there? If he was InuYasha's reincarnation, he wouldn't have the white hair or remember Kagome, (although the remembering would be up to the author.) It just seems a little brief. I love to see InuYasha and Kagome get together, finally, however it happens. I think that you could ellaborate a bit more because this short one-shot is really very good but it could be better. Don't sell yourself short, your writing style shows you have talent.
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