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 Title: Character insertion 2/2
Reviewed By: Tim Seltzer  On: January 20, 2005 18:07 CST
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Name:Kyone Nickname:The Bitch Gender:Female Age: 15 Hair colour/style:Brown, down to the shoulders Eye colour:Brown Skin:White, slight tan Build:Like out of a magazine. Height:5ft 6in Weight:175 lbs Village:Konoha Rank:Ninja-Chuunin Weapons:Twin knives, Aku symboled biker gloves with retractable blades, Kodachi Special techniques:Kage Bushin, two earth elemental moves(name 'em yourself), and fire breathing. Preferred style of clothing:Light jacket with 'Bitch' on the back, jeans, and the aku symboled biker gloves. Personality:Sarcastic to freinds (like Tim), doesn't think twice of charging head on in any situation, might grope guys, and no sense of self preservation in any way. If a male is being interogated and she gets bored...if if she's pissed, her knives get rather close to doing more than circumsion. History:Was promoted with Tim because of the 'leverage' of winning most of the fights...and at the end have a blade at the referee's balls. Was on Tim's team, and barely escaped ambush. Friends or people she gets along with:Shikamaru, TenTen (both Tomboys), Hinata(attempts to make more outgoing...in embarassing ways), and anyone else you want I didn't put under dislike. Dislikes/disliked by:Niji(treats women as weak), Sasku(trator), Lee/Gai(idiots), Sakura(whore). Crush/lover:none Neither have last names for a reason, they don't have bloodlimits so it'd be pointless in Naruto. They just have skills. More info later
 Title: My character
Reviewed By: thesoggywolf@yahoo.com  On: January 20, 2005 01:26 CST
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Friends or people he/she gets along with: Naruto, Shikamaru, Kakakshi, Iruka, Asume, Ino, TenTen, Hinata, Chouji, Kiba,   Dislikes/disliked by: Neji , Sakura , Sasuke Kankuro and Gaara and Temari   Crush/lover (If they have one): Likes Chouji
 Title: My character
Reviewed By: thesoggywolf@yahoo.com  On: January 20, 2005 01:24 CST
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Stole the nose trick from Kiba.)   Preferred style of clothing: black spandex shorts inder a pleates skirt and a tight blue tee and a Happi coat from her fathers resteraunt that she ties with a blue sash. Wears bright blue sandles. Has a clock hung around her neck.   Personality: Eccentric about training, she is great at hand to hand. She eats a lot of food, but burns it off. She is afraid of the dark and will light candles with her weak fire tricks so that she can see. She is a coward, but refuses to leave her friends. She is will only eat a certain brand of chips, very picky and like sour foods. She ears pocky on fridays. She only eats junk food once a week. She loves jello. She is very unsure of herself and is self concience. Though she loves Chouji, she refuses to get fat. She is loyal and refuses to pester or show her true feeling. She likes to play tricks. Is mean to Sakura.   History: Village destroyed, moved into town. Father dies mother becomes cook. Mother remarries and Husband hated her, so she stays when her mother moves back into the farm. The farm burns, the husband dies again and mother returns. Dies some time later. Aki lives with Chouji's family and learns to become a ninja. She moves out at 14 but moves back in 6month later. Put on team 15 with Iruka as the leader.   Friends or people he/she gets along with: Naruto, Shikamaru, Kakakshi, Iruka, Asume, Ino, TenTen, Hinata, Chouji, Kiba,   Dislikes/disliked by: Neji , Sakura , Sasuke Ka
 Title: My character
Reviewed By: thesoggywolf@yahoo.com  On: January 20, 2005 01:21 CST
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Name: Fujiwara, Itoe Nickname (If your character has one): Aki Gender: Female Age: 16 Hair colour/style: short, whispy brown hair Eye colour: tawny Skin: tanned Build: average, straight, stickish figure, average bust, wirey, looks 14 Height: 5'5 Weight: 122   Village: Lived with her family on a rich farm, until a rebellion broke out and her family was removed to the safety of konoha. Her father died of a lung disoreder, and "Aki's"mother worked at a resteraunt that Chouji's father lived at (metaphorically speaking). Aki and Chouji became friends (at age 7) and Aki joined the ninja academy but was placed a year later than Chouji. She came ot live with them when her mother died. But moved out at 14. She adores Chouji for his rare personality, which he is too shy to show, or is often pushing food into his mouth.   Rank: Ninja - Chuunin   Weapons: Chopstick, Jutte, throwing stars and a BO   Special techniques: Ability to poison food and water by touching it, can disolve poison. uses your own sense against you. And can manipulate air. She also can light fires, is profusely good with spices and will use powders and smoke bombs to scare opponents. She uses her own technique, opposite of Chouji's and will shrink down to the size of a mouse. She also uses sparrows to fight for her. Can freeze peoples bodies from within. Loves to shape shift and make clones. uses them to finish chores. (she is afraid of the dark and ocuses charkra in her eyes to make her see better.
 Title: I wish to contribute
Reviewed By: Magus Black [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 19, 2005 23:40 CST
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I too have a large profile, filled with things you can use. But it would best serve your purpose if I give it directly to you via your email. Alas since this site doesn SAY what your email address is, I will have to ask you to drop me a line so I can send it to you. My email adress is silentassassin20022001@yahoo.com I hope I can be of service.
 Title: Character insertion 1/2
Reviewed By: Tim Seltzer  On: January 19, 2005 14:25 CST
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Name: Tim Gender: Male Age: 15 Hair colour/style: Brown, short, and all over the place. Eye colour: Brown Skin: White, slight tan. Build: Has muscles, but not large enough to be concidered bodybuilder. Height: 5ft 9in Weight: 258 lbs Village: Konoha. Rank: Ninja:Chuunin Weapons: Katana, shuriken, biker gloves with retractable claws. Special techniques: Kage Bushin, two decent wind element techniques (name 'em yourself), and a high tolerance of pain. Preferred style of clothing: Trench coat, biker gloves, ripped jeans. Personality: Calm, loyal, and quite the cusser. Somehow ends up pissing off almost all the women he meets with meaning to. He's sarcastic to freinds off the battlefeild(you know, insults, peanut gallery...the works)and serious on the job. History: Passed the Chuunin exams by sheer luck a year before the Ochimaru attack that killed the third Hokage. Since passing, trained with his team. They did various missions for a year in various places. On the day of return they were ambushed. Only him and one other surived(another character I'll add later). Friends or people he gets along with: Shikamaru (plays chess with), Hinata, and just about anyone that you want that ain't disliked. Dislikes/disliked by:Sasku, traitorious bastard. Kakashi, always late and reading porno. Lee/Gai, idiots. Sakura, fangirl bitch to the end. Crush/lover:none Try to have only Gai know him at first. The other chacter I'll have by 21st
 Title: Part 1 of a lot
Reviewed By: DianaKurusten  On: January 19, 2005 00:27 CST
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Name: Royce EISENHAUER Nickname (If your character has one): Roisu > (Thats how you say Royce in Japanese) and Ausländer (bad term for Foreigner. See history) > > > > Gender: Female > > > > Age: 16.5 > > > > Hair colour/style:. (Royce does not use hairspray, she hates it.) Royce has light, layered tawny hair, kinda red in the summer. She has natural aburn streaks scattered randomly in her hair, especially her bangs. She wears her hair pulled back with a head band and her bangs and forelocks falling into her face. >>>> Other skills: cooking, speaks German, Japanese, English, and Manderin, can read five languages. Artistic. Tactition. Games. Sewing. Gardeing. Basic medical training. >>>>>>> > > > > Eye colour: slanted, hazel green > > > > Skin: pale, but doesn't burn > > > > Build: average, small bust, lean, wirey > > > > Height: 5'4 > > > > Weight: 140 pounds (musles) > > > > Village: Born in Waves (birth to 9), lives in St. Klodwig's (9-10), 10-12 (snow), (12--) Konoha > >   > > Favorite: color: Jade and ambure >>>> Book series: A Ninja Tale: Made up story of a girl ninja who fell into another world and is trying to find her soulmate who was bound to another world by a witch. Come Come Paridice>>>> > > Rank: Anwärter-in training, a common footsoldie. Later attained Genin rank fr
 Title: 5 of a lot~ Im done now
Reviewed By: DianaK  On: January 19, 2005 00:20 CST
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> > > >   > > > > Dislikes/disliked by: Sakura (Royce thinks Sakura is a ditz, Sakura thinks Royce is a lesbian.) Naruto (Royce thinks Naruto is baby-ish, she likes him in a fleeting way, but finds him too clingy, but she'll stand up for him) Hinabi and Neji( has problems with their cruelty towards her friend, also dislikes White Eyes, due to her own bloodlimite, Hinata excluded because she is to meek to hate), Ino (thinks she is skanky) > > > > Crush/lover (If they have one): Has a crush on Shikamaru and wants to kiss Kiba > > > >   > >
 Title: 4 of a lot
Reviewed By: DianaK  On: January 19, 2005 00:20 CST
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> > Preferred style of clothing: She is way guady, she used to wear uniforms and hates to conform. her japanese tunic thing is jade and black, her undershorts black. her wears arm bands with poisons in little breakable vials, that she releases with her chakra. She also has a baggy black jacket that she wears with many pockets. it is tied with a violet sash. She has a pouch attached to her leg and upper left arm. She carries a backpack with food, herbs, scrolls, and exstra weapons. She also has exstra clothes in there. She never leaves unprepaired. > >   > > > > Personality: Royce is a flirt. She likes guys that aren't much trouble, tired of high maitanance people. She hates when people bother her, having never had any time to herself as a child. She plays tricks on people, but is uncanny in her ability of forethought and tactics. She is babyish, but mature when she senses danger. She is not confident in her looks, because she doens't really fit anywhere. She is willing to help people, unless they deserve whats coming to them. She is uncouthe, sneaks and spies, making her a great ninja, but a lousie neighbor. Sometimes her friends are turned off. She is a hybrid and her other half is looked down on. Her formal training is vast, but she never leanred to be lead. She likes being in charge, she loves games, and sometimes she makes up her own techniques, like the ones above. She is afraid of spiders. She is also perverted. > > > >   &g
 Title: 3 of a lot
Reviewed By: DianaKurusten  On: January 19, 2005 00:19 CST
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>> Phasing: She can walk through things. This is caused by changing her body into chakra. This makes her weak and she might faint if she takes people through barriers or walls with her. >>> >> Fire attacks>>>> >>.Shadow clones>>> >>> Barrier of Gold: She can create a barrier of wind and chakra which appears gold. This protects her and people within a ten foot radius. It is impenatrable as it is a complete sphere and even travels into the ground. She uses the energy of the earth or the enemy to control this technique, can last as long as theres energy in her opponants. As soon as they all loose energy, her high level techniwue wears off. >>> master of her weopons>> >>>Hand to hand>>> >> healing ninjutsus>> > > > >   > >
 Title: 2nd of a lot
Reviewed By: DianaKuriusten  On: January 19, 2005 00:18 CST
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> > Rank: Anwärter-in training, a common footsoldie. Later attained Genin rank from a small ninja village at age 10. She is now a Chunin of Konoha. > > > >   > > > > Weapons: jutte, Kubotan (they have knives hidden inside, she carries those around in pockets, and hidden in her clothes) Naginata this is her primary weapon, though she resorts to the sai and shurikan if she looses this. She harnesses the weapon with her chakra and can cause waves of power to flow from it. > > > >   > > > > Special techniques: >>>>>waves of Naginata: She harnesses her chakra into her weapon and sweeps it down, depending on her amount of power used, she can either stab you from a distant or temporarily damage the flow of you chakra causing you to fall offbalance. >>>>> >>>> Telepathy: Her blood limite is rare, a witch power that is activated when she lets chakra flow into her hands or eyes. To activate this power she has to either imbue an object with her power, in which she can activate at any time by reconnecting the chakra and ordering it to return to her, or she can (this takes longer) link to anothers (object or persons) energy and move it that way. >>>>> >> Wind: No a cool name, but she has control over wind, without the need to use her chakra. She can use the wind to knock things out of the way, or even break through things or people. >>> >> Phas
 Title: Part 1 of a lot
Reviewed By: DianaKurusten  On: January 19, 2005 00:17 CST
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Name: Royce EISENHAUER Nickname (If your character has one): Roisu > (Thats how you say Royce in Japanese) and Ausländer (bad term for Foreigner. See history) > > > > Gender: Female > > > > Age: 16.5 > > > > Hair colour/style:. (Royce does not use hairspray, she hates it.) Royce has light, layered tawny hair, kinda red in the summer. She has natural aburn streaks scattered randomly in her hair, especially her bangs. She wears her hair pulled back with a head band and her bangs and forelocks falling into her face. >>>> Other skills: cooking, speaks German, Japanese, English, and Manderin, can read five languages. Artistic. Tactition. Games. Sewing. Gardeing. Basic medical training. >>>>>>> > > > > Eye colour: slanted, hazel green > > > > Skin: pale, but doesn't burn > > > > Build: average, small bust, lean, wirey > > > > Height: 5'4 > > > > Weight: 140 pounds (musles) > > > > Village: Born in Waves (birth to 9), lives in St. Klodwig's (9-10), 10-12 (snow), (12--) Konoha > >   > > Favorite: color: Jade and ambure >>>> Book series: A Ninja Tale: Made up story of a girl ninja who fell into another world and is trying to find her soulmate who was bound to another world by a witch. Come Come Paridice>>>> > > Rank: Anwärter-in training, a common footsoldie. Later attained Genin rank fr
 Title: i wanna be in it too
Reviewed By: SesshomaruInuyashaKagome [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 18, 2005 17:58 CST
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Name: Megan Hendrickson Nickname (If your character has one): Meg Gender: Female Age: 17 Hair color/style: blonde with highlights to the shoulders/ usually worn down or up in a bun or ponytail Eye color: baby blue Skin: lightly tanned Build: small muscles, fit, and thin Height: 5'7 1/2 Weight: 137 lbs
 Reviewed By: Heeroschibiangel [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 18, 2005 16:09 CST
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hehehe email me at gaarasangel@yahoo.com for my character profile.warning it is long...*snickers*i want itachi!!!!and gaara...
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