"Harry Potter & The Hanyou Prince" Reviews/Comments [ 77 ] |
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Reviewed By: kaja1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 16:20 CST Comment/Review: LOVE IT! UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: Penthesileia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 15:38 CST Comment/Review: this is really funny fic so far. i love it. Can you bring in Inyasha's friends sonn? I just think Miroku groping Sango, and sess/kouga aurging with Inuyasha during dinner or something would be hirlous. No9t to mention Kagome 'sitting' him when he gets annoying.
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Reviewed By: Tamlin who isn't logged on On: February 10, 2005 13:10 CST Comment/Review: Yay! New chapter! Great work again. I love how this story is working out. Somehow, I like the fact that you haven't brought any other Inuyasha characters in yet. I like how Inu has to figure things out without Kagome or someone smacking him up side the head and explaining everything to him. It makes it soooo much fun to see, though I think a scene with Mr. Malfoy eye to eye with Seshoumarou would be a kick. Can't wait for the next.
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Title: I'm in stitches!! Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 12:40 CST Comment/Review: LMAO!! Hoo...I knew this was going to be fun! Yes, InuYasha's potty-mouth is going to get him into all kinds of trouble, hehe. I also figured a 'translation' spell wouldn't be hard to find. (Gee, I wish I could have that so I woudln't have to use the subtitles! I absolutely hate the english dubs.) -- Question: I've never read the HP books, only seen the movies (loved them) and I don't know how they spell it in the books, but as far as I know, a Fireplace has a 'flue' not 'floo' (sorry, I'm a bit of a spelling nazi and it's been bugging me, LOL) Either way, spelling "oops" or "typos" are completely secondary to how one spins a tale, and you are doing that quite swimmingly!! I eagerly awai the next chapter! *snicker* Poor Yash-kun: "You don't know what ramen is?!?" ...what a riot!
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Reviewed By: Dark Heart On: February 10, 2005 11:57 CST Comment/Review: Heh heh...glad you updated. I just can't get over how cool this is. Nice how you're keeping Inuyasha in character, while having him helping the others out. And I'm actually glad you're not bringing in Kagome...I don't think I'd mind her so much if all the authors hadn't of started writing those stupid cliched fics where Inuyasha "betrays her" and she runs off, becomes a demon/half demon or finds out she's some goddess-like being, falls madly in love with "the last likely person" (who, should they remain in the series, we can automatically assume will be Sesshomaru despite the fact that it's OOC for him), and so on and so forth. *Sighs* So many overused plots and cliches, it's an amazing thing when we actually find something original and interesting like your fic. Heh heh...hope you update soon!
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Title: hey Reviewed By: DeathEater [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 17:00 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Well it's good but enless you're going to write more I'm more likily to read it.
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Title: OH MY GOD! Reviewed By: Dark Heart On: February 03, 2005 00:44 CST Comment/Review: *Gasp!* Can it be...? There's actually a Harry Potter/Inuyasha crossover fic that DOESN'T include Kagome being betrayed in some way and running off to Englad to instantly fall madly in love with Harry/Draco/Some other guy? Are my eyes decieving me? Is there truely a shred of originality on this site? *Gasp!* UNBELIEVABLE! Originality ISN'T dead after all! HUZZAH!
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Reviewed By: HpInuDude On: January 31, 2005 13:13 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Awsome. All the other Hp and Inu fics are terrible, but yours is amazing! Hurry up with the next chapter before I forget about the fic. Again Awesome!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sereke [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 08:21 CST Comment/Review: Wow! Great story! I love it!
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Title: O.o! Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: January 20, 2005 12:48 CST Comment/Review: OMG, that is hilarious! I don't normally like crossovers, but your premise is facinatingly believable. I love it! InuYasha loose in London! --- When InuYasha oh-so-easily slashed through the Death Eaters' wands and then pulled Tessaiga...I was rolling. They sure don't know how to deal with a rowdy Japanese Hanyou! LOL ---- Please, PLEASE continue!
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Reviewed By: Sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 04:04 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Sweet! Ilove your story and cann't wait to ready the next chappie! Reading stories like these give me hope for the Manga comic I'm working on. Heee... it has nothing to do with fan fic but it still helps. Oh and the rating... well I never give a total 10/10 score. I still love it though.lol :) Oh and are you going to bring in Kag's and the others? How is Harry and inuyasha going to understand each other? well Iguess i'll have to wait! ;)
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Reviewed By: Foxylilraven(Not Logged in) On: January 19, 2005 21:59 CST Comment/Review: actually i thought you were shorttaning Lockheart...neepay good chappie... update soon
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Reviewed By: InuMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 22:12 CST Comment/Review: This is really promising so far, and very well written. I applaud you; most HP/Inuyasha x-overs are, well, terrible. In this fic, you've given us a good and plausable reason for the crossover. The only thing is, if Harry has to go through ALL THAT every time his life is in mortal peril to summon Inuyasha, well, you'd have one very dead wizard boy! Perhaps, now that the initial 'protection' spell was cast, recalling Inuyasha to his side might be a little, I dunno, easier? :)
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Reviewed By: whirleeq(not logged in) On: January 18, 2005 18:08 CST Comment/Review: Oh this is wonderful so far - great premise, and very original. I so can't wait for your next installment. I'd also just LOVE to hear Dudley's reaction to Inuyasha. :)
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Reviewed By: WickerB On: January 18, 2005 17:49 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I love it so far! This is a really unique take on this crossover, and it's positively delightful. I just hope to see more out of it soon. I'm surprised Dudley didn't seem to recognize Inuyasha though. After all, he was the one watching his show. While I do hope those books help Harry a lot, I wouldn't like it if this turned into an Uber-Powerful!Harry story. Those just get annoying after a while. But these books seem interesting and original (the one in human flesh creeps me out, but I think it's funny that the guy found a chainsaw next to it). Anyway, nothing really to criticize. Update soon, please!
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